Reviews for Olimar's Final Visit
Team Sonic Forever 4910 chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
Oh no! I hope Olimar and the other pikmin would be okay. I cried along with Olimar and feared for their safety. (Lets just say I can feel what the characters feel) I was wondering when you are going to update this or if you are going to cotinue. If you can't then I understand why you can't, anyways this story has a lot of potential and I hope it will continue, but until then I'll wait for the next update. Thanks for taking your time on reading on comment. See you on the next update if you want me to.

-Team Sonic Forever 4910
Library2.0 chapter 4 . 7/3/2013
That was a pretty good chapter for a short one
SuperDupe1000 chapter 4 . 7/1/2013
This is an amazing story! Love it! :D
However, I have a question. You said Olimar decided not to take Whites and Purples into the cave, yet purple Pikmin appear on the plate and cover the other Pikmin with their bodies...? where did the purple pikmin come from?
Regardless, great story. I will be reading this till the end!
123lionclan chapter 4 . 6/21/2013
Hopefully Olimar is just tired... Yay for update! Good as always.
Library2.0 chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Nice. Can't wait for what happens next. Please update soon. I would absolutely love more.
Library2.0 chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Ohhh. Update soon. This is interesting.
ZPF chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
You had better not copy\steal my idea for the deaths of Olimar and Louie!
ZeldaandPikminforever chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Olimar, I officially call you crazy. :) I like it so far, it just needs a little more dialouge.