Reviews for Idolmaster: Project AU
tikitikitiki chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
I have a feeling i'm gonna like this story, cant wait to see what you have in store :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I want that onigiri! He has interacted with miki, takane(?), hibiki, possibly azusa's mother, and thats all i can think of :)
Project Idol chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
This is an interesting story. I think I can guess some of the characters. Uun... there's Miki,... I think the the class rep is Takane but she's too old to be a first year... Maybe Chihaya(Final Guess!), and then there is Hibiki of course. Then the landlady was Azusa's Mother, but Azusa is too old too... I think Yuu-kun's mother is Eri from idlom ster Dearly Stars. Maa... I did my best.
Now about the fanfiction in general. I had trouble figuring out where the sentence end due to the consistan "-"s. You should try to use a few of these as possible. I have a feeling that Yuu-kun is in for a ride. You should try being more descriptive with your surroundings but what you're doing is fine too. I... really don't have any advice do I? Oh well, Happy writing!