Reviews for The Commencement
Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Haha. Oddly enough, Kaiba reminds me of one graduation I had to miss with a teacher who apparently went along this sort of subject line. He makes really good points though and it is completely in Kaiba's character to do this. The best part though, had to be his final line of dialogue. Totally Kaiba and totally awesome! I do have one small criticism though.
"If you have, congratulations. You have been introduced to you haven't, give it time."
These two lines are confusing. I'm not really sure what is supposed to be said and I came up with two possiblities.
If you have, congratulations. You have been introduced to who you are not and if you haven't, give it time."
Or
If you have, congratulations. If you haven't, give it time."
But there may also be a third option so my little criticism is to fix up this line.
Anyways, awesome job!
-D101
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Wonderful!
Scaehime chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I can actually see this happening. Great writing, excellent job of keeping Kaiba in character.
God bless, Scae
redconvoy chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Oh good God! XD That was a great speech. Those kids just earned their first scars.
Peach Wookiee chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Truly a signature Seto work. Good job.
dragonlady222 chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Seto told it like it is. I hope they listened and understood.