This is a great story! I hope that there may be more? Anyway. I love it!

Another excellent rendition from you. I particularly liked the Andy POV- allowing explanation of all those little moments we all experiencebut writ large in Miranda’s battered psyche. Thank you.

Will this ever get finished? Ugh... eternity! Muse! Get to work!

Please please write more one day to this as ever brilliant.

Wish 14 would show up.. Such an awesome story.

Aaaaaand the 14 part never came. I guess life happens, right?

I hope you're doing well, please take care.

Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter.

This is the first DWP femslash fic I've read, and surprisingly, (at least to me), I really enjoyed it. I wish you would continue it.

I love this half finished story. I would love to see 2 things. First, it get finished. Then a second version from Miranda' POV. I would love to know what is going on in her head. Awesome story that I do hope will get finished one day.

I love your economy of language. In my opinion, there are very few wasted words. I pay as much attention to how you write, as to what you write. Really, really good. I'm gushing sorry.

I love this story. It is very sweet. Nothing better than a protective and caring Miranda.

Surprise ! Surprise!..No part two, your quite the pranksters...lol I guess that's what I get for believing everything I read...

Jena~

I suppose it's nice to have parents that are so concerned about you that they feel obliged to try and dictate your life, even if your over 21. Poor Andrea makes her life so complicated by submitting to her parents when all she really has to do is explain them that she needs no "outside" help even if it's from misguided parents.

Jena~

So happy that Andrea is becoming aware that she wasn't sleeping in any guestroom, and it's only chapter nine . I hope she will feel more confident in the later chapters?

Jena~

Any chance of chapter 14?