Reviews for Glass Walls
Brown Eyed Skye chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Hey there! Please continue these one shots! I love them a lot they are original, funny, heartfelt, and completely adorable! When you can please update!
compa16 chapter 2 . 5/9/2013
This is so cute
TrivialQueen chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Girl! Why didn't you tell me you'd written this? It's phenomenal! I love the reality of their modern setting (and mad props for working in retail). I think Matt in particular is a perfect, I really think you captured Young MacGuffin. Also, as a side note I love the name Matt/ Matthew. Also also all the Matt puns are awesome. He was SO CUTE in the rain. I love it.

And Young Macintosh with his blue marker and being both proud and flirtatious while at the same being sweet enough to help bring Matt and Merida together. Basically I love everything about this and I hope you feel better!
MidnightShadow07 chapter 2 . 3/27/2013
LOL I loved this chapter as much as the first one. I wish there was more but the two chapters were great! :)
SnowSphinx chapter 2 . 3/13/2013
This...this isn't actually complete, is it? I just saw that and my heart broke a bit. Oh please, you must continue this! It's delightfully marvelous!
rockster0810 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Please write more soon. I have fallen completely in love with this fic! You portray the characters so well. Update soon!
Wolf of the Western Woods chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
Yes! another chapter! Yay! Best Christmas present yet!
I love your fics. They are the only ones I faved so that I could reread them a few times (ok, more like twenty or thirty). They never diminish in entertainment value, no matter how many times I've read them.
I love this chapter, esspecially the costumes. It's really cute, and she and Matt were so cute together, very natural for their personalities. When My sister told me there was another chapter out (because she always finds things first) and that it was Halloween, I half expected Matt to have given in and dressed as "Mattman" (seeing him dressed as Batman would have ben hilarious) but this turned out soo much better. Thanks for the great read!
Phoenix xxxxx chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
We'd actually call it giving some one a lift. And what you described, we'd call a pickup, a lorry is one of the bigger vehicles used by companies and such to move goods. And, can I just say, that was really cute :D
Tenshi Chupip chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Daww! That was cute. .
Wolf of the Western Woods chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Adorable! The best description I can think of, this is just plain adorable! The two of them working in Toys 'R' Us together! Matt is so shy and cue and thoughtful! And Merida is perfect, you really did well with her character in this one. Great adjustments to today, that must have taken a lot of thought. I esspecially liked the blue marker on Macintosh's sleeve, that was a nice touch. Thanks and kep writing , you're just grand!
Terra Nympha Dryadis chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
OMG! I cannot properly express just how cute and darling this was. I thought I'd broken my squeaker for sure, what with all the SQUEEEEEEing I was doing, lol Seriously, though, I do love this story.
Fett012000 chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Very nicely done.

I'm quite happy to see someone take the source material and translate it so seamlessly. The characters were themselves just in a slightly more relatable circumstance. As a former retail drone, the imagery and dialogue not only bring back cringeworthy but also fondworthy moments. I'm going to put it out there that this could be a multi-chap thing quite handily. When you have real-life memories to draw upon, it does make it easier to write so I'd encourage you to go for it...if that was ever an intention.

I suppose that in was great and i hope you write more with this pairing...because doggone it...they're adorable. :) Cheers!
Rays of Color chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Oh my goodness, I love what you did with this. It's wonderful to see these characters brought into a modern setting, and the fact that you translated them so well just makes me squee with joy. I loved the entire thing, but their interactions in the car were just so sweet and awkward in just the right way. Please, please keep writing these characters! I love your style, and your mastery of the characters is amazing. I think you've got some major skills, so please keep using them! :)

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us!
TotallyElena chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
What a fun idea! Would you mind if I did a Brave story like this with Merida in place of me? She would soooo hate my daily life lol!
GAM3R G1RL 13 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
I must say, that was a great story! I don't know where you got the challenge from but you met it and exceeded! I love the interaction between Merida and MacGuffin!

I would send a longer review but I'm on my phone so I'll post a better one when I can be in my computer.

Great Job though!
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