Couldn't even finish this chapter and Could tell the story would be horrible. Went to reviews and saw that it was worse than expected. Didn't think it was possible but it was. Don't waste your time this is not really a sequel.

Thanks for a great (re)read! Nicely done! Still a fave.

Well, that's the end. Interesting two-part series, consistently good, though the unexplained introduction of Tiberium was a little strange, and frankly I'd be much happier if I didn't know the author's opinion on homosexuality. Love thy neighbour, but not too much, guys, because that's immoral! Either way, done and dusted. 9/10.

You can define a sense of morality pretty easily without having to resort to God. 'Don't be a dick' covers 90% of all situations. I hate when authors do this.

It sounds like your friends were just trying to be kind to you.

Fuck.

Oh, I love a good Mass Effect reference.

Tiberium? ...IS THIS FUCKING C&C?

Hmm.

The stuttering makes my reader struggle like a mofo.

"Odds on, it's not that she doesn't want to think of anything, it's that she doesn't want to think about the things that you think are important. Once one of your parents does that long enough, it's hard to see past that, to the other things they do think about."

That is a truly profound statement. Thank you!

Thanks for a great read! Very Nicely done.

Lets hope that F***er has no Horcruxes.

Huh.
Mixing HP with C&C. I... don't think I encountered such a crossover in any form till now.
Well, then let's see where this ship will sail.

What are 'heavy aluminum gears'?

'War is worse than hell, because in hell there are only the wicked and the sinners'.