Where are Sirius, Moony, Hedwig, and Crooks?

Both stories are intense! As you rewrote them, you closed many plot holes. Telling how Sal survived, explained much. His death, will now lead to a number of spell searchers. The enforcers researchers is a loose end.

Two things. You have brutal Harry not Hero Harry for chapter 5 and how did the unspeakable get out if the floos stopped and anti portkey and anti apparition in effect?

Good story, I look forward to seeing where you take this.

I suggest that the author read the bible with the same critical eye that he uses on J.K. Rowling works.
I don't mind the characters' points of view on religion but skip the authors' notes.

Sooooo... where’s the story for Tonks?

I want to like this. The idea behind it is good. But your execution in this sequel is so heavy handed with your own personal US based conservative Christianity, it takes away from the story immensely. "Lily doesn't meet the definition of personhood" is the most unnecessary addition to take a swing as abortion rights. Her insistence on converting those who don't agree with her to "the Truth". The constant digs at the Clinton administration and Ginny's American friends complaints that public schools are there to make students ignorant, that "complicated" (aka not having a flat rate tax where the rich have to pay what the poor do) are what specifically makes corporations take over small businesses. That constant hard on for guns and weapons. The rape and violence being okay but premarital sex not.

None of this is necessary, it brings nothing to the plot and all it does is distort the characterizations of Harry, Hermione, Ginny and above all Lily. You have such strong science and magical themes but you're trying to force it together with a contradictory American based conservative Chrisitan mindset which is the antithesis of those very things. It doesn't work.

Well harry got em, gg.

The fuck who tried to kill harry?

Honestly, i always thought Molly weasley was a small-minded bitch, tbh. It's not just her living in ignorance and letting her children be untrained and helpless. It's also the fact that she in her own way is prejudiced aganist muggle-borns. How she treated hermione in the canon isn't something that is in any way acceptable.

Salazar the fuck?

Wow, that's some training camp harry has the ex-hogwarts kids at.

So.. harry still thinks of hermione as a friend. Well atleast harry's mom has an idea of how hermione feels towards harry.

Wow... harry still in britian i guess, and in a wheelchair?

And everyone else is in america.. interesting.

Never ended a story with respect for Lucius before. I enjoyed these two stories immensely, and I thank you for that.

I don't usually post negative reviews, RARE really. This story is 3 out of 10 in my opinion. Other reviewers provide why and I dont need to repeat that here.

Plus, I have never been so disgusted by someone like YOU. Telling your gay friends that you believe their preference for their gender is immoral. You are basically telling them to go to HELL, just not being a jerk about it?! Being a JERK wasn't the point! That's like being friends with a black person, smiling at them while telling them they should be a slave and hating them. That's just WRONG. A lot of opinions conflicts with each other, like people's political views are different as well as on religions. Some hate each other, frustrate each other, it's a fine line to dance on, combined with friendship. But in the end, that opinions formed from experiences people went through, are that opinions.

0Being gay is not an OPINION, its WHO they ARE. It's part of THEIR whole BEING. So FUCK YOU, author, FUCK your preaching, FUCK your prejudice! I dare you to tell your gay friends, that YOU believe they should burn in Hell since YOU believe it's wrong and immoral, I know your gay friends know YOU think it immoral but do they even know the extend of your belief and your thoughts?! That you think them like that?! You believe in so much SHIT in the Bible that's WAY old and honestly there's no WAY it's the exact SAME it was a few thousand years ago humans change EVERYTHING all the freaking TIMES. So a human creating a Bible and using it to justify his actions to people and control them while burning human women on stakes, killing gay people, black and such. THAT I found is much more believable.

I regret reading the stories now I'm just so DISGUSTED with your hypocrisy.