|Reviews for Strike Witches: The Paradox Timeline|
| Admiral X chapter 12 . 3/11
Is this story on hiatus or will you rewrite it?
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/28
Great story, only problem i can see is that the grammar is a bit off
| Aleksandr Sakai chapter 12 . 12/20/2013
when is the next chapter comng out
| Admiral X chapter 12 . 12/15/2013
Do You update before christmas? I expect that you don't give up this story, it's one of best stories that I read in Fanfiction net!
| Knucklejoe8 chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
Jeez. The brutality of a war that never happened. Anyway, really good read so far and brilliant writing, one of my favorite fanfics ever read!
| Ghost chapter 12 . 11/16/2013
Quick Side note I've been thinking about. In WW2 the US Army Called the P-51s "Angels" or "Gaurdian Angels" why not have the Joint Navy and ground forces do the same? Disscribing the witches?. It could work " Angels Ten Mikes out" "Copy Angels in the Sky" THAT'S pretty much WHAT THEY ARE I think adding that would add some to the story
| Dilnos521 chapter 6 . 11/13/2013
Hey there, fuji92. Dilnos521 here. Boy, it's been a while, huh?
Anyways, I finally remembered to read one of your stories, and when I went to your profile to find one I came across this one. I had started reading it a while back, but writing my story along with a few other things put reading it into the back of my head. Now that I got a chance, I decided to restart from the beginning (I can't even remember where I last left off), and, might I say, this is an interesting story.
The first thing I found interesting was your description of the Joint Naval Force. Given the year they were from had not arrived yet, I enjoyed how you created a background for them. Plus, you actually had Robertson present the Strike Witches with a brief history of their world during the time period said Witches were in.
Second, I liked how Hawke and Charlotte learned that they were related albeit in different dimensions. Of course, how you handle the interactions between them is up to you, but I do support your current relationship for them.
Anyways, I have to cover the rest, so I'll be sure to give you another review when I finish the story so far. Until (and past) then, I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. Good luck.
| trueangelito10 chapter 12 . 11/11/2013
Compare to my story... no you can't even compare them. Truly I have more to learn. Your story is well organized. Well keep at it, continue. :)
| mack.ffnr chapter 12 . 10/28/2013
I just wanna ask, are you going to include the Yamato in this fanfic...
Most of the personnel of the Joint Naval Force are using modern weaponry
you should add an awe, jaw dropping scene when they see the biggest battleship ever made since everyone of them are still young and have no idea what the Yamato is...
| N1ght-13 chapter 12 . 10/24/2013
wow overall still making me impress about this fic
| N1ght-13 chapter 7 . 10/24/2013
damn it's like i'm reading an anime movies
| N1ght-13 chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
need update this fic me so hooked
| FLAZE35 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
To those complaining about a lack of updates:
Stahp. If you think it's so easy, try writing a series yourself. Would you rather have short, low quality chapters or good chapters with detail and plot development?
To the guest commenting on ranks:
At this point, with 12 chapters, it'd be kind of a pain to change every rank mentioned in the series, and to most readers, it will make little to no difference. The same goes for my comments about grammar. Though I point them out, I am not saying the author should go back and spend time fixing them. They aren't bad enough that people won't be able to understand what the author is trying to say. Plus, it would take a lot of time-time that could be used to write the next chapter.
| FLAZE35 chapter 12 . 10/22/2013
Grammar errors here and there, but other than that I have no complaints. Been following this story since it was first posted and I like how it has turned out.
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/12/2013
I just want to clarify an error in this story:
Navy pilots don't use air force ranks. The rank "Major" don't exist in the US Navy. You should research more about military ranks on the internet.