Well made. I love it, just wonder if both Yeager (I mean Chuck and Shirley) meet each other. It'd be hilarious. I actually have watch the other chapter of this, but I kept waiting until this time. And one last request, faster updates without compromising the quality.

Okay... Operation Blanket is a Pyrrhic victory for the allies. With all of those dead and equipment (and military vehicles) destroyed, they're gonna have to mass produce lots of new weapons to replace those that were lost. One of the key weaknesses of the European powers in WWII is that the resources that they can manufacture into weapons is limited. Heck, the US war-time production in WWII overwhelmed those of the Axis powers' allowing the Allies to pour in lots of firepower than the Axis can dish out.

As for Chuck, he's gonna get a big blast once he meets Jane Thach (who is the alternate world version of the late John Thach). You know, I find it really funny on the idea of Shirley meeting Chuck. I'm wondering how he'll react on that. Man, this is what I await the most in this story. Can't help myself laughing if it does happen.

lols this was an epic chapter totally worth the wait

another great CHAPTER! and DIAMONDS TO YOU!

well looks like the Allies are in the offensice in africa, also good scenes back home there whit the RnD and the Neuroi and so on, so keep going

- I have to admire you writing in a non-native language, even if it results in a number of errors. It can't be easy to do that; I'd positively shudder to think what my writing would be like in French (my most adept non-native language).

- In NATO lexicon, bogey refers to an unknown aircraft. Bandit refers to a hostile aircraft.

- I liked that karmic justice that Maloney is served, being demoted to private and reassigned far away to do menial work.

- Beyond that I find your story interesting, and very much look forward to seeing more!

I like where you're going with this story, but you were right, you have WAY to many grammar errors it's not even funny. Ever thought of getting a beta reader?

PS: just to let you know, this is NOT a flame, it's just an honest question.

this story is very intresting and a good way. i like to read more of it to see what happens will they get back to ther nromal time zones and era or will be stuck there for ever...10/10 for great making!

This is a good story, but did you know that there a movie similar to this? It's call the The Final Countdown (1980)

What the pairing for this story?

honestly this is beautiful writing keep up the grand work

A correction: the counterpart of Jane Thach is John , not James; but the chapter is very good. Happy New Year!

Quite an interesting chapter. I wonder how will the commanders of the European Carrier Force react when they saw a presidential portrait of Ike hanging on a wall. Oh, I will like to see Jane's reaction when he meets Chuck Yeager HIMSELF.

Update ASAP.

well looks like some people meet some intersting persons, wow great chapter nice meeting in the modern earth between the president and the admirals and witches good chapter and so keep going oh and a merry christmas and a happy new year

Oh, my goodness!