Okay, I want to see how well F-15 Eagles and Su-27 Flankers will handle the Neuroi. Heh, I bet these fighter jets are faster than the striker units and the Neuroi will have a hard time landing a hit. I wonder how everyone is going to react though.

Well, you finally wrote a story. Good. I must say, and this is rare for me to say, I liked both the plot and characters (normally I'm neutral in feeling).Though the plot does appear to be overused (time travel and such) you do use alternative universe rather then going back in time. So that is different.

A tip of advice though. When someone is talking over the radio or such, you do not have to say,
(Radio)"Etc etc".

You can easily say,
"Etc etc" a voice said over the radio.

Just some advice. Use it or don't, it's up to you.

LIKe IT!