| Reviews for Strike Witches: The Paradox Timeline |
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   jeanymarie99 chapter 13 . 5/18/2019 Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! Looks like you forgot something after I read the date between Page 12 Chapter 11 and Page 13 Chapter 12 few minutes ago that I haven't realized yet. In Chapter 11, its August 10th while in Chapter 12, its August 20th. You probably forgot to add this chapter, or at least a Separate mini-chapter for both Yoshika and Sanya's birthday because in between chapters, its August 18th. Thought it will take place separately since Yoshika is in Africa with Admiral Robertson's JNF and Sanya is in Folkestone 501st Base, Britannia. I hope the USS Dwight D. Eisenhower has a Long Range Communication so members of the 501st and maybe JNF in between Africa and Britannia, will celebrate birthday for both Yoshika and Sanya. |
| 47Zhou-Yu74 chapter 2 . 10/3/2018 Ah, I tought the 501st was disbanded in Brittania after Warlock incident, and annihilation of the Hive above Gallia... |
| 47Zhou-Yu74 chapter 1 . 10/2/2018 First mistake - first encounter with Neuroi in modern times started an alternative World War I (If you look at the borders during Second Neuroi War, period that shown in the Anime, you can see that Central and Eastern European countries are the same as pre-WWI period in our world). Secondary - as far as I know - Neuroi never set a foot on Liberion soil. |
| CommonwealthFlip chapter 2 . 7/14/2018 "Naval Strike Wing"? Isn't it supposed to be Fleet Air Arm? |
| Francisco914 chapter 1 . 12/9/2017 Too bad this fic is dead, i really enjoyed it.. |
| RN6Pro chapter 14 . 11/28/2017 Nice |
| Assistant Elite General Matteo chapter 12 . 11/5/2017 "I look damn hot." You're wayyy too old for that kind of stuff general. |
| Assistant Elite General Matteo chapter 7 . 11/5/2017 No one's laughing at ya joke Russian! XD |
| Assistant Elite General Matteo chapter 4 . 11/5/2017 For correction, it's gonna be a VERY long day XD |
| Assistant Elite General Matteo chapter 2 . 11/5/2017 Great start eh? |
| Assistant Elite General Matteo chapter 1 . 11/5/2017 Ok, I'll go read this again to spam reviews to force you to reply to me XD |
| Xboxgorgo18 chapter 6 . 10/17/2017 You forgot to show Japan's arsenal wth? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2017 Where is the Zumwalt?! He might be kill those bastards with his gun and nuke! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2017 The neuroi's Raven shield look like an experimental armour named"Prometheus"Those protection have abillity to regenerate because nano repair system. However,The Prometheus armour can't regenerate as fast as neuroi'raven shield and can't resist too much damage from miasma beam. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2017 Dammit. Piss off i can not write some thing that like website Again the names is S.T.R.I.K. |