I wonder if we have to wait until he finish his own work in real life from University? We just have to be patient rather than force it because his own work wasn't finished yet. I know him just a little bit but we will wait until he shall comply his work by not just watching animation of Strike Witches 2007, 2, movie, operation victory arrow and 2016 new animation Brave Witches 502nd, but also the novel and manga until 3 weeks of completing the construction of portal and Operation Guardian Angel, Casualties are not acceptable or the readers will get heartbroken itself if what happened to Not Just Hawke and his Co-pilot best friend, but surviving members downed airman and witches. Besides, can you imagine if there is the idea of making the fanfiction of Command and Conquer Generals Zero Hour Shockwave that USA Generals Like Malcolm "Ace" Granger Air Force General, Alexis Alexander
Super Weapon General, "Pinpoint" Townes Laser General and even Ironsiode Defense General with Hi-Tech Gadgets can Help The Witches of the 501st to defeat the Neuroi?

UPDATE PLEASE!

I want my Christmas present as one update on this fanfic

Hm… This story have potential and seeing it from you, It will be good story, I will try to read and understand storyline. Good luck Fuji

I will continue reading and ponder about it

- Takuz

I do wonder how will those Witches interact with someone not in their timeline, Well gonna read!

this si good. your writing is getting better. but you write in present tense, and its weird. well, in USA anyways. most books are written in past tense, unless its written in first person.
subbed.

well you can tell a story, thats the good part. everything else is bad. but at least you dont throw in random ~ or * or bold.
anyways, you have a gift for telling a story, please, do humanity a favor and learn how to write. cus this is the best story ive run across in a while. just dont ruin it with some stupid love triangle.

Good show bloody good show

update please

No casulties? Bullshit.

The whole (Radio) thing is not only annoying but bad writing, all you need to do is indicate in some other way that they are talking into or through a radio, not slap a header on it like it's some kind of weird coding.

The modern task force and their aircraft are exceptionally wasteful of their extremely limited munitions, when they should know perfectly well that they have no means of resupply and no manufacturing capability to replace expended weapons.

There is no indication as to how the modern task force is able to seamlessly patch into and communicate with, at least in theory, obsolete radio communications with unknown encryption, if the Witch's communications are not outright magic.

You have continually messed up the naming (LNS/USS) of Liberion ships and you cannot seem to stick to one name for the Sims-class Destroyer present.

You continuously jump around and switch viewpoints for only a brief few lines, before hopping to another one and delivering a similarly brief and lacking section before changing again. Stop. Pick a primary viewpoint and stick with it, and deviate only to contrast or provide insight/exposition that the primary view cannot.

You need an English-speaking beta, preferably not only a native speaker but one who actually understands how to write themselves. It is very apparent that you need one.

This has a degree of potential, but it's being wasted with such blatant unsolved issues.

Your story is great man, continue with the good job

Of Note: The USN and USMC use Hospital Corpsmen as medical personel. not Medics like the Army.

hey, since it is obvious that you are going to be bringing in other ships and fighters from the USA and other nations...can you give the marine air units some love, like have a carrier with a squadron of marine F/A-18 super hornets?

Finally...FINALLY AN UPDATE! THANK YOU!

Worth the waiting. Nice story.