Reviews for An Opportunity of Fate
Piterio chapter 9 . 10/28/2012
This is amazing story, the only reason it got so little review is probably because of the first chapters of it, for me reading though the was a little hard. But i prevail! And got a chance to read a very very good story. In it concept it totally different from the others, well written, have a good and well placed sub-plot and shows a very deep level of character analysis. It certainly something worth reading and even rereading(which is i definitely gonna do upon a new update). I than you for such marvelous story and gonna be waiting with anxiety of next update
Guest chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
Sakura should have EMIYA!
Guest chapter 8 . 10/24/2012
This is great. Please save Sakura from Shinji soon. I hate that fucker.
NewAgeOfPower chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
*claps hands*

Well done! I predict DELICIOUS drama and SUFFERING between the two Tohsaka sisters.

Who will Rin summon? DUN DUN DUN.

Quality control is holding, although there are a few typos, nothing is severe.
reality deviant chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
interesting development.
i hope for rin issei confrontation regarding magic soon too!
as well as the talk between issei and sakura...
and ayako is drawn deeper...
im surprised shirou doesnt smell the magic on the ofudas...
KailSakray chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
yup i enjoying it.
AznPuffyHair chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
Good job Sakura! Sic "her" on Shinji, and then we can work on your grandpa dearest. Now we just need to rack up the pity points and threaten the author enough he/she will give you the happiness you deserve later! ...Though maybe it won't be with Shirou. We'll see. I just can't shake this feeling that you're going to literally pour despair over her though... So long as you don't kill her?

Luvia's appearance is a surprise, not because she is participating, but rather because she is observing. It also provide a good twist in the family relationship. I do wonder if her presence will develop Dark Sakura more when she eventually start gunning for Shirou.

And speaking of whom, it's a good thing that at least he knows he's a pack horse. When surrounded by girls who can kick your ass in quite as many ways as they can (because they can), then you better know your place. It does bring the question of just how strong this particular pack horse is. I think even if she is allowed to, Rin can only shop for so much, and I doubt Sakura or Ayako is the type to simply cut loose.

But i digress. The near deployment of Unlimited Blade Work is a surprise. It is indeed terrifying to know that it is so close to completion even before the war started. And knowing that he can now make explosives? Well, it has taken it to a new height that perhaps even CG Emiya will hesitate in taking on. Still, near trigger by anger is... worrying. It kind of shows that Shirou has some anger issue that's more than just anger at seeing the innocents being hurt. Or maybe it's only because it was Sakura? Even in the UBW route, it was only deployed because it was Sakura he's rescuing... Hmm... cyber cookie for your thought?

I can't really say anything for Cassandra, and i haven't for the longest time. I felt that she is important in some way other than just filling the gap, but there is something else there. Same with Issei and Ayako. Those two will make a difference, but how much remained to be seen. It's surprising to see that Sakura has a natural affinity for feng shui...

And that is six out of seven confirmed, with three already summoned and ready to roll. The last one can either make the war or break it, because all it'll need is one psycho (like in the fourth) to make it all go to deeper into hell. Or it could just be some poor random sap that really won't do much later. It'll be revealed later, and I look forward to how things will develop. I am also very curious on who Rin will summon, because I just can't think of anyone that used a horn in their legend (though it may be so obvious that i'll bang my head later...).

Keep up the good work. UPDATE SOON!

PS: Have you ever entertain the thought of Dark Sakura hijacking the kitchen in the Emiya estate and kicking Shirou to the dining room? I mean there ought to be time when they argue over who would do the cooking...? I can't really imagine it though, but i feel that it'd be worth some laugh...
TsuinRasengan chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
now i have to ask is this a shirou/harem or no... also will shirou be massacring the matous... when is the talk between shirou and ilya
cormalin chapter 8 . 10/22/2012
This... is amazing.
Lican chapter 8 . 10/21/2012
I had my doubts about this story at the beginning, but man it is awesome, waiting for more
Cera Symmetry chapter 8 . 10/20/2012
Great story!
I'm curious how this will all play out, as well as if EMIYA ever gets any more involved.
Project Shrine chapter 8 . 10/19/2012
Hopefully none of the changes bite EMIYA in the ass later.
BlazeWings chapter 8 . 10/18/2012
man this was a great chapter! keep them coming!
AznPuffyHair chapter 8 . 10/18/2012
Ah... papa Kirit died... At least now Ayako wouldn't need to kill anyone for vengeance (though i doubt she ever will...). Still, at the very least he died a relatively peaceful death.

Sakura's apparent dual personality is intriguing. There is something about that it just tells me you have something big in mind. Who knows, maybe it'll play some major role in the future. Or maybe i'm reading too much into it. Either way, I like how Issei describe her general feel though. She isn't evil, merely very angry and hungry for the opportunity to return that rage.

Speaking of whom, Issei is developing quite nicely. He probably won't do anything great anytime soon, but I foresee that with the right influence in his career development, he could become a force to be recon with. If power attracts power, than what does it say for his future when he's near an average, an incarnate, and whatever you want to call Sakura?

Finally, the thing EMIYA changed with Illya became quite obvious this chapter. I'm not quite sure how that will ultimately save her, if at all. However I am quite certain that things will look very interesting soon. This also meant that she probably can't act as childish as she is in canon... but does this mean she can properly act the role of the older sister, or is Shirou still the onii-chan that he is in other universe? Probably won't matter for at least another chapter or two.

Well, it's a good chapter. Things are getting set up and fate is running its course. The only known thing about this war is that apparently most participants are teenagers (four confirmed, with Sakura and Ayako on 'pending' and one more unknown). It probably will still be pretty ugly though. All it takes is one psycho...

Anyway, keep up the good work. I look forward to when it all starts. UPDATE SOON!

PS: I wonder what EMIYA think of all this...
BlazeWings chapter 3 . 10/18/2012
wow im really likeing how this is going so far! kepp up the good work!
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