|Reviews for An Opportunity of Fate|
| Bobboky chapter 32 . 7/11/2014
Very good work
| Jouaint chapter 32 . 7/11/2014
| reality deviant chapter 32 . 7/11/2014
i really like how Hiro, Raiga, and Jin are added into the moonlit world... how it encompasses more people, and shows the reactions (like the cop who didn't want to get involved upon learning its one of 'THOSE' cases).
wonder what Raiga will make of Ayako, and what he thinks of her. liked the Mr Ayase character.
cant wait for more
| regfurby chapter 14 . 7/10/2014
The only thing that comes to mind when re-reading chapter 14 is, "The beautiful lemon was censored..."
Several paragraphs worth of details cut out into a few lines that don't do the original justice.
Makes me so sad :(
| ultima-owner chapter 31 . 6/15/2014
stopping the grail will be like pulling teeth without anything to numb the pain or proper tools
| reality deviant chapter 31 . 6/15/2014
good chapter, lovely last scene.
i do hope its not the last of Akiko and the track girls we seen.
| Windninja1000 chapter 31 . 6/15/2014
Great chapter, can't wait till the next chapter! :D
| Jouaint chapter 31 . 6/15/2014
Great chapter. Please update soon.
| Quathis chapter 31 . 6/15/2014
So, it looks like Shirou, Rin, and Sakura really need to have talk about their future relationship and how things currently stand. Cause it looks like Sakura and Rin have kinda switched stands here. Very good to get most everyone's viewpoints shown here. Ayako's situation was better explained, so Medusa's actions aren't quite so heinous. Not that it has moved from heinous. Until next time.
| Shador chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
En realidad Alaya no tiene pensamiento racional, al menos no como un ser humano. Es más como un sistema operativo. No es que importe demasiado. Tu fanfic, tus reglas.
| exillion chapter 9 . 5/31/2014
I had to stop reading after Sakura kissed Shirou. Man, Sakura is a fucking doormat. Shirou deserves someone like Rin, or someone like Saber. But Sakura? A fucking doormat.
| ultima-owner chapter 30 . 5/18/2014
| Bobboky chapter 30 . 5/18/2014
| Jouaint chapter 30 . 5/18/2014
Another good chapter.
| reality deviant chapter 30 . 5/17/2014
i wonder who ryuudou called.