That cliffhanger. I thought you promised no more cliffhangers?!

I'm so loving this story so far. I love how much Joker cares for EDI and I always thought they were so adorable. Poor girl trying to navigate through human emotions, lol. It's gonna be fun and amusing to read, I can't wait!

Please update soon! :)

I am most certainly looking forward to another friend. I must see what will happen! I noticed you are also employing the ships I use whenever I play through the game. :) Garrus and Shepard and Edi and Joker are my thing. Shekarian and Jedi for life!

Anyway, I also implore you to merely extend the length of each chapter and try to employ less archaic vocabulary. Some terms and sentences are predictable for me. (but then again, I practically read dictionaries.) :(

I've enjoyed the fic so far! Its easily one of the best I've seen so far. :D

Now this was an intriguing first chapter. Grammar's good, personalities intact, and a gentle start to a decent fic.

I shall read on. :)

Don't worry, i'll just sit here, waiting for another chapter to magically appear.

Don't mind me, just staring at the chapter count trying to will another to appear

I love this please update soon

This is pretty good, you should make more chapters soon

pleeeeeaassssse update soon i beg you

Nice to see another chapter!

I'm so happy I found this awesome story! I love how spot on you've captured everyone from the game. EDI actually seems to be an AI and not just an extremely awkward person. And Joker still being haunted from the first Normandy really adds more to his character. Great job, I can't wait for an update!

Also the Shepard/Garrus relationship on the side is very cute.

pesky life, always getting in the way...

screaming from who I wonder? EDI perhaps? Joker?

You're learning Joker, that's good.

because it's not like women are exactly falling over themselves to date you.

I've always been fascinated by the workings of a nonorganic mind like EDI or Legion. You have done this spectacularly well in my eyes.

Argh! How could you leave it here? It's not often I find a good Joker/Edi story, so I'm really enjoying this. Hope Joker realizes she's still there and helps her soon!