|Reviews for Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Ivory The Sacred Relics|
| allen Vth chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
simple yet exciting beginning :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/8/2012
It might be late for this but two things :
1. I love this story. There are way to few 5th gen myster dungeon stories about.
2. Introducing...Team False ( White Rank )
Name : Otto
Species : Genesect ( look it up )
Moves : Techno Blast , Bugg Buzz , Flash Cannon and Work Up
Personality : A robot , he has no personality
Name : Xang
Species : Porygon2
Moves : Magnet Rise , Discharge , Charge , Tackle
Personality : Provocative despite being genderless
Name : Pory1
Species : Porygon
Moves : Tackle , Thunder Wave , Conversion
Personality : Annoyed about everything
Name : Pory2
Species : Porygon
Moves : Magnet Rise , Agility , Detect
P.S. All pokemon on team false are genderless
| TheGlaceonFanati chapter 26 . 11/7/2012
Forgot i couldn't post direct links on FF... -
farm9 . staticflickr 8061 / 8164880479_d773610860_b_
| MountainLord-92 chapter 27 . 11/8/2012
Very mysterious, the cave seems to be creating illusions of people from the adventurers' pasts.
A belated happy birthday, sorry I couldnt say it on the day.
Good couple of chapters, update soon please.
| TheGlaceonFanatic chapter 27 . 11/8/2012
Great chapter! And you're welcome! xD
The is definitely getting very interesting. I wonder what will happen to everyone. The illusions are mysterious... and you did a great job with "You know what" xD
I am really excited for future chapters!
| Trainer Naps chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
This is pretty good
| Coli Chibi chapter 27 . 11/8/2012
Weird illusioney cave...
| Traveling Master chapter 27 . 11/7/2012
Woah, that was epic. All those different things happening at the same time. Really looking forward to who this mysterious character is and if mystic will be okay
| Francelette The Angel chapter 26 . 11/7/2012
Nice. Im i still in the story?
| TheGlaceonFanatic chapter 26 . 11/7/2012
First, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! As a gift, and a token for gratitude for writing this story, i made you this photoshoped birthdaycard. I am not a great photoshopper, so it might not look really impressive...(I couldn't add the alters, since that would be out of my league. You'll know what i'm talking about, when you see it) - 8061/8164880479_d773610860_b_
And excellent chapter! It was very interesting! I think i know who that mysterious figure is ;) and i also liked how Static complains about teams every time xD
| kkman57 chapter 26 . 11/7/2012
Happy Birthday! Love this chapter I wonder what the next chapter will bring.
| Traveling Master chapter 26 . 11/7/2012
HAAAAAAAPPPPPPPYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYY BIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTT THHHHHHHDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YYYYYYYY!
Congratulations, and great job on the chapter, it does reveal many things about the characters, and epic foreshadowing. Really looking forward to what happens next.
| MountainLord-92 chapter 25 . 11/6/2012
Finally up to date.
I'm liking the character developments that have occurred throughout this story and it is heartening to see the improvement in writing quality.
It seems as though Simon and Jesse have met in the past, possibly that is what caused him to lose his memory, and the Queen of Thieves may have strong links to Dew and Morgan's parents. Liking the mystery that surrounds their parents, why did they disappear?
I'm looking forward to how this story progresses
| midnight lark chapter 25 . 11/3/2012
Lila's first apperance! Yay :)
great job,cant wait to see where you go from this
| TheGlaceonFanatic chapter 25 . 11/4/2012
Awww, was Mystic too shy to hug Jesse with her own body? Lol, awesome chapter BTW! Definitely answered a lot of things. I didn't expect Shock to be the friend that they should be meeting... and the last 2 characters are bugging me. I know one of them is the Liepard you mentioned on your page... you doing a nice job with the hints BTW!
I am excited for future chapters!