Reviews for Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Ivory The Sacred Relics
Midnight lark chapter 45 . 7/27/2013
I just noticed that you had posted new chapters. Nice job as usual, and I wonder who Lila is looking for
Trainer Naps chapter 35 . 7/26/2013
Kramzak; the photogenic warlord
Trainer Naps chapter 33 . 7/26/2013
WHAAAAAAT! Mindblown
Trainer Naps chapter 32 . 7/25/2013
*snicker8 Kramzakia...

Epic Star Wars moment is epic
Trainer Naps chapter 29 . 7/25/2013
Javaline always reminded me of Starscream...
Trainer Naps chapter 28 . 7/25/2013
Don't they know by now that Tyson is invincible?
Trainer Naps chapter 20 . 7/24/2013
Congrats on over 300 reviews! Altough I was...tragically robbed of giving the 300th, I must congratulate you. This story has definately been worth the timr that I have invested. Keep it up!
Shamekeeper12 chapter 45 . 7/24/2013
Talk about unexpected! I would never see that coming. Swift is da brotha!
Though, I must partially agree with allen Vth. Many of these sentences lack the power I noticed early in the story. It seems to me quick updates are driving you more than passion for the story. Slow down, get a feel for the tale. Let the words flow. Don't tell us what happens, show us what happens.
I'll be waiting for Chapter 46!
Trainer Naps chapter 19 . 7/24/2013
We're off to see the warlord, the wonderful warlord of Oz!
Trainer Naps chapter 17 . 7/24/2013
Yeah, I always imagined that the Pokémon world would have Type stereotypes
Trainer Naps chapter 14 . 7/23/2013
Epic brother-sister battles...a thing I know a thing or two about...
Trainer Naps chapter 13 . 7/23/2013
Epic battles are epic. Good job!
Trainer Naps chapter 9 . 7/23/2013
"Where is the western desert?" Hm, I'm no cartographer, but I'm guessing it's in the west...

If he's the king...then who's the queen...?
Trainer Naps chapter 8 . 7/23/2013
Lol "land mimes." Funny typos are funny
Un-named chapter 45 . 7/22/2013
I SAW that coming. Swift being Morgan and Dew's brother. You didn't hide it very well. You can foreshadow, but not very good. But the Fan-Fiction itself is very good. One of the better fan-fictions I've seen. :) Keep up the fun reads! (Just work on your foreshadowing skills please. It's no fun when you tell us everything before you say anything. It was the same as when you first introduced Aqua as the spy, it was OBVIOUS that it was Dew and Morgan's mother. PLEASE work on them.)
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