|Reviews for Return to Heavenly Host|
| Kagomelover666 chapter 9 . 4/10/2015
Well, I need the next chapter to know. You leave cliffies then, "You'll find out in the next chapter!" WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?! XD
| gteamonkey chapter 8 . 8/6/2014
that was great! hope you post the next chapter soon! :)
| Deltahalo241 chapter 8 . 7/26/2014
I'm a bit confused, is Aki supposed to have gone to Heavenly Host with the original group? or did she go with someone else?
| Spudly777 chapter 8 . 7/25/2014
I think there's some stuff you need to know:
1: Hinoe is dead
2: Shinozaki is actually Ayumi's mom's maiden name. The Shinozaki family only gives birth to woman.
3: A couple years after a child of the Shinozaki family is born, the father dies.
4: In Book of Shadows, there is the Shinozaki family tree, and it probably had Aki's mom on it, and since she's a woman, he face on the tree would not be marked off. You can say Ayumi didn't notice this, but I thought that I'd tell you anyways.
| Lyuna Threnody chapter 8 . 7/25/2014
This is really great! Please update soon!
| Deltahalo241 chapter 6 . 7/19/2014
The end to this chapter is similar to Book of Shadows
where Ayumi finds out she is related Sachiko and Yoshie Shinozaki
| blueallstar01 chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
Why is everyone on a first-name basis. :o.
| Deltahalo241 chapter 3 . 6/11/2014
Okay so far, seems to happen a bit quickly though, try to slow the pacing a bit. Also the school has a dresscode, so Aki couldn't enter like that, you could make an excuse like 'she hasn't got the uniform yet' but otherwise your clothing descriptions should just be casual clothes for the weekend.
| Akito Sohta chapter 2 . 3/10/2014
They're both in bed... I bet Miki comes In and sees them like that. :3
Great story so far. *Brofist*
| SuperAwesomePandaKitty chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
I'm loving it so far, please update! :)
| DJTBProductions13 chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
interesting story so far. Could use a bit of work, but still... it's pretty good. I like it.
| NeverRegretAnything chapter 3 . 11/18/2012
Awww I just love Ayumi and Yoshiki!
| Veteran 2002 chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
you did great so far. i liked ayumi x yoshiki. 5/5 plz continue if nescessary to you. i'll wait even a million years. :)
| nerdData chapter 2 . 9/27/2012
AwwwwwI've been watching cry play this(dat voice) and this is one of my fav. Parings. Of couse I couldn't wait for cry to finish it and just read what happend aaaannnd I got side tracked. This is really cute. A bit short I will admit. But cute none the less. I wish this section was a bit bigger and that I wasn't so busy with my other storys...getting side tracked. Hopefully you update soon so I can see more fluffy goodness.
| ClearlyOriginal chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
SO short MAKE longer sereously