Reviews for The Secretary
Guest chapter 2 . 6/25
It is getting a little bit better . I think you should work on it more though
Guest chapter 7 . 5/3
Omg stop! At least finish up from where you left off with a continuation and quick epilogue
Lilian chapter 7 . 5/3
I like your story..but your author notes are longer than the chapters
Marie36017 chapter 1 . 5/3
I e read several fanfics on the couple. I have yet to write anything. Would be fun to pick up a story that has been started. Don't know how to go about setting that up. If your story is still available I might like to give it a try.

Marie x
stephanie.j.daw chapter 1 . 5/3
It is not easy to write a good Christian Grey, but have done a good job, you deserve extra brownie points for that. xxx
mrsdamon chapter 7 . 5/3
Hey Zephyr, bummer this wasn't a chapter update, I've not forgotten this story since I first read yours in 2012. Sorry that you're not continuing, hope you find inspiration to write more of this story at some point, or if you are allowing someone to adopt it, to choose a writer that'll do great justice to it :)

All the best!
xx
Somethingalltogether chapter 7 . 5/3
If someone doesn't adopt this, I will
naeo99 chapter 7 . 5/3
I'm sorry to read your not finishing this story. I think it has great potential. Good luck.
cokebear9903 chapter 2 . 4/12
liking story so far but am a little confused about the time-line. I thought this was after she had interviewed him & took him up on the offer he made to her there to come work for him?
Misfortuneintheprogress chapter 6 . 5/10/2014
Please update soon. I love your story and would love to read more. Please hurry!
1fitgily chapter 6 . 2/8/2014
What a delicious story. And just when it was hotting up!
Did you move this story somewhere? I'd love to continue reading!
Thanks for what you have so far, it's really good!
1fitgily chapter 5 . 2/8/2014
**"I thought you would like it." I said as I cut a piece of my steak, just how I like it, pink and juicy.** lol, naughty boy.
1fitgily chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
Expect the unexpected, Mr. Grey. Maybe she's not as innocent as we all thought...
1fitgily chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
It seems Leila had expectations. It makes me curious about what type of relationship they have.

Such a hot day dream. I hope it comes true!
1fitgily chapter 2 . 2/8/2014
I like this.. Leila's involvement makes it interesting. Poor Elena, she never gets the guy. Lol.
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