Reviews for Farnell's Solilquy
meixel chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Very clever indeed. My only thought / suggestion would be that since it is a 'solilquy', you could eliminate the quotes for each line and use only a beginning and end quote for the entire speech. I think it would look more like one man speaking, but read just as well. You produce such fun pieces!
twojedi2001 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I thought that this was a well-written story based on a very clever premise. I especially liked it each time that Mark "missed" the turn.