|Reviews for Feeding Time|
| bluefirefly chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Great monologue, it really gives insight into how Severus' mind works in your stories. Keep up the good work!
| Judith Shakespeare chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
HAHAHAHAHA. I love this so much. :) Thanks for venturing into Snape's mind for us!
| Gyvir26 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
"...but at least I'll never have to be fourteen again, thank Christ." You know this cries out for a story where this happens, right? He should be careful what he wishes/hopes for, after all.
Very nice stream-of-consciousness style, it really seems to feel like Snape's mind
| Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
OH! Now I want to see an accident that changes Severus into a 14 year old again! *Evil Laugh*
This was brilliant! I honestly want to read more! Now I wanna know what he was thinking when the Dark Mark got stronger and even began to be painful! Sev is my favorite character, after all! (Psst, Tom is second!)
Would be really funny if a fourteen year old Severus and a fifteen year old Tom were to suddenly meet, due to an accident that happened to them both! *SQUEEE!*
| Lilmissxx chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Ahahahaaaaa. This line made me laugh so much: "What's going on with the Ravenclaws? Oh, it's just Lovegood. Spreading strawberry jam on her bacon. Of course." It's just such a typical sarcastic Severus thing to say!
I hope your next one-shot is finished soon - I can't wait to read more :)
| DoctorPopeSamuel chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
This has become my favorite portrayal of Snape ever
| SerenityWaywards chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
This made me smile- I got woken by my sister screaming up the stairs at 7 this morning.
So... I'm just dandy. I mean especially with my mother interupting every five minutes... Asking me do you want the curtains open? Shouldn't you be revising? Why are you reading-be courteous enough to reply will you?
I could murder her right now... -_-
| keelhaulrose chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
This was hilarious. And I think you write Snape better than anyone out there. I know he's a difficult character, and easy to go too angst-filled with, but you have such a nice balance with him. Thank you for writing this.
| MollysSister chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
OMG I never thought about Moody seeing through clothes before. Ewwww
| KrisEleven chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Oh my gosh, this was perfect. How can you get into Snape's head so thoroughly and still manage to make me laugh out loud? He is such a snarky a-hole and yet I lust have lol'd ten times while reading this. I love the way you have him view the world and the other characters; it always makes me view them in new and interesting ways. Good piece. :)
| Moewe24aol.com chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Yes he is, and that's of course very funny and endearing, and it threatened to make me say 'what a funny, humorous story' in the beginning, but having read it til the end, I noted what made you say that it almost turned into angst on you. He's such a good observer, and his internal remarks are witty and fun, but there's a lot of gallow's humour on his part, and we all know that his dark thoughts about his personal future are going to come true soon and that his life until that day will be lonely, dangerous and tantalising most of the time.
But anyway... the image of AD with egg in his beard, and new species evolving in the very depth of it is just great. I do love beards (easy, I don't have to wear one *g*9 , but that one really is a bit too much. Somebody should send an expedition team inside, I'm sure Hagrid would be the first to volunteer to rear some babies of the newfound species *lol*.
Didn't I say it before... now I'm sure you do corrupt me *evil grin* ... after having looked up the meaning of the word 'strap-on' in Wikipedia, and after having found some very interesting pictures and descriptions of the specific ways of using them I can only say ... oh well... never too late for an old woman to learn new technologies, right? (at least in theory!).
Thanks for the nice story!
| gwendlyn chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This was pure fun to read :)! I really love his snarky and sarcastic musings, the best part being Dumbeldore's beard and its breeding species. The idea with the T-shirts is also great. The only person missing was Trelawney :). I like your subtle way in how you bring his growing fear for the upcoming war into the story. And the fact that he mentions Dumbeldore's prejudice against Slytherin house. This definitely let many of them join Voldemort in the first and second war, who would maybe have been reluctant otherwise. Anyway, this was lovely!
| Smandaangel chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
LOVE IT! Just perfect levels of snark for a morning, with or without the coffee :)
Another wonderful insight into Severus' head, which I think you got just right, coming from someone who has difficulty functioning properly til at least lunchtime, I completely understand the snark levels!
Laughed out loud at the 'small animals' in the beard (someone please do some fan art for that) and the t-shirts... Inspired my dear! Also love the comment about Luna just being herself!
Yet another wonderful treat x
Much love xxxx
| notyetanotheralias chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
the part about dumbledore's beard and moody's all-seeing eye had me laughing hard!
you managed to balance everything perfectly: how snarky, bitter, acidic, clever, observant he is, and above all, how lonely and insecure and unloved he feels. poor severus!
| JaneDoh0 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
This was hilarious-I almost laughed out loud when Severus muses about Mad Eye and T-shirts.