Reviews for Unforgiven
trollzor69 chapter 1 . 21h
This is fucked up but good fucked up, more please
Bolo42 chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
Wow, that's a good, sad and deep short story.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Dude, epic to say the least and worthy of creating an easy to make sequel-well done:)
Kira-XA2021 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
That way really fucked up, and I loved every second of it. Keep up the good work.

On a slightly more "constructive" note; Good levels of immersion and suspense with excellent grammar. Just the wright amount of information to give me an idea of the tone and (emotional)direction of the story without revealing anything of the plot or it's progression(that's good for the opening of any story).

Overall, can't wait to see were you take this story, and by that I mean I can wait,though I'd rather not.