Reviews for Legacy of the Fallen
Culaio chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
Like always very interesting chapter :), inter actions like always were great but I must say that you are a little unfair toward people with bloodline, you said that they didn't earn their power but same can be said with sayians they are BORN with superior abilities instead yes they train later but so do people with bloodlines. Saiyans naturally possess exceptional strength, far greater than that of humans and other alien races, and are quintessentially built for fighting; the average Saiyan is said to have a power of 400 to 660(before receiving Master Roshi's training, Goku was already able to lift Bulma's car at the mere age of twelve). Even weaker Saiyans are capable of conquering most planets alone, also "zenkai"(growing stronger after healing from mortal wounds) ability isn't exactly fair. naruto like other saiyans was born with power, like people with bloodlines are born with them.

By the way you implied that diluted blood makes him weaker then saiyans, isn't that opposite ? EVERY hybrid is shown to have greater potential then pure blood saiyan. As author of dragon ball said only reason why Pan(1/4 saiyan) didn't turn into super saiyan is because she lacked drive to become one and because he had no idea how female super saiyan should look(probably bigger reason XD).

keep up the great work :D
WalkersCrown chapter 3 . 10/2/2013
In the Words of Teen Gohan "this... Is Awesome!" loving this one man and it not as dark the other two read which is great thing is how the heck is he a Quarter saiyan? and how much time has passed since the earth went kaboom?
shadowmaster0304 chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Amazing a cliffhanger...-_- Update soon. :D
shadowmaster0304 chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
No way its Ino, you son of a gun. Update this story it sounds like a winner if you update more.
Deflow chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Epic spoiler alert: it is reaveled that Bulma have a older sister named Tights Brief.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Their was never any rated M Naruto x Zangya or Gohan x Zangya fanfics. Who will accept this request?
Deflow chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Sigh. 18 is cold and mean as usual. Sigh. You need to update faster or focus on one story at a
the master mooma chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Just wanted to get your thoughts on something. After reading your recent updates of your naruto dbz crossovers it really got me in the mood for some more dbz and i noticed something. goku and naruto have very similar personalities as i am sure you will agree idiotic, naive, all around good guy the list goes on and on even there origins are similar in many respects they grow up alone due to circumstances around there birth having powers beyond there control and after years becoming able to control that power and become the strongest warrior after starting out as the dead last/ lower class so if all of that proves to be true how come naruto gets harems and people love to heap love on him yet goku rarely ever gets any despite everything he does.
Kyuubi-Titan chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Short but Im glad your able to capture the characters well. Especially there abrigded persona's.
Qzh chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Good chapter and all but dude did that preview get my attention more than the chapter.
Looking forward to the next update.
p.s. kinda sucks its labeled as a NarutoxZangya pairing and we have yet to see her.
Dragon Man 180 chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
Well, you know me, I'm hoping for NaruHina in the harem. I hope at some point Sasuke meets Piccolo and demands training so Piccolo can smack him around a bit before refusing.
Markus-Antonius chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
Fun story to read
rivereagles999 chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
Man i love this story already! just started reading it today! Sorta seems like naruto takes A LOT after Gohan, even though they've never met.
SPark681 chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
Oh this looks like its gonna be interesting to read, can't wait to see more of it keep up the great work!
Psudocode Samurai chapter 3 . 9/30/2013
Dont really see Hinata working out given his views on their bloodline and the like. Still, always nice to see Eighteen _
86 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 4 5 .. Last Next »