|Reviews for Legacy of the Fallen|
| Batthan the Dark Knight chapter 2 . 9/20/2012
Very nice, so looks like Ino sees that Naruto is somewhat different, I wonder how the others including Hinata would react on seeing Naruto's 'body improvement'?
| StrongGuy159 chapter 2 . 9/20/2012
Cool story continue please.
| The Fox Paradox 9 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
I think you're getting Mr. Piccolo and Mr. Popo mixed up a bit, in the quote area anyways. Good chapter but I have to wonder if Orochimaru has heard of the dragon balls. Or has he though of trying to take over Cell with his semi-immortalality jutsu. Not to mention that sense Cell has the DNA of multiple warriors he could bring back all of them with the Edo Tensei. Thats if he got Cell's blood.
Anyways keep up the good work and stay awesome!
| Kyuubi16 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
Uugh, when did Piccolo find the time to learn the Kaioken techniques?
Naruto at age twelve shouldn't be able to use Kaioken times ten because of the young age of his body. I'll give a pass on the lower levels because of his status as an Uzumaki or Jinchuuriki but it still feels off man.
I don't have a gripe about all your other stories because everything is reasonable, but the DBZ fan in me is just raging at a lot of your decisions. The power scales and so many other things are just eschewed.
Dude, please, if you have an idea, can I hear about it before time so I can at least give some advice?
| Dante-SaiyanWarriorOfTheFuture chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
Awesome so far :D
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
Very nice so far.
| thanatos's-shadow chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
yay some naruino fluff! can't wait to see what reactions everyone else to being a genin is... especially hinata.
| Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
I'm happy with the harem so long as either/both Hinata and/or Haku is in the harem and neither of them is/are bashed
I wonder what the Iwa nin thought of the big 'booms' that pickalo obviously made
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
nice very nice DODGE
| kyril2303 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
I have to say really liking this story so far and also like how you have brought Ino out of her fangirl tendencies in this story. Also a good one that Naruto could go up against would be Garlic jr. b/c he has immortality so he would have survived Cell's rampage you could say he was released b/c of it also could you add 18 in Naruto's harem you could say that Cell spared her on a whim then she went into hiding b/c I don't believe she would continue to fight someone whom outclasses her completely well that is my idea hope that you update again soon love all the dbz stories you have out
| ero-sennin56 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
hmm why dont you have him desended from broly?he would simply have a ridiculous amount of latent power, and when he does go supersayian its just like broly's except without the insanity lol
| Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
So he is a Saiyan wasn't sure, and wouldn't he need to be 2 at least to beat Cell if not 3 if cells strength has increased.
| Psudocode Samurai chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
I guess I would have to ask, in which way do you want him to awaken his potential? Do it like Gohan with the Elder, or a situation like where Goku went SSJ for the first time? Or maybe no even that, but his own force of will/drive coupled with an influx of Kyuubi chakra. And as an aside, how about instead of the normal transformation, you let Naruo's hair go red and his eyes purple, forcing people to be reminded of Kushina, if you still have Kushi and Minato as his folks that is.
The chapter itself was solid, though it seems like Naruto is at Goku's point after/during his fight with Vegeta, it's strong (especially for seven months) but without gravity training I don't see how he will reach Cell level in time, but the to is still quite early _
| X.Z chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
THIS IS EPIC. Ino is always one of my favs when she is not a foming rabid fangirl cus she got potental unlike Sakura.
| Kotetsu Bushido chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Those damn klorfors. Tried to klof Freiza right out of his money. Killed those little bastards is what he did. hahaha, so refreshing to find someone elso who likes team four star. heh heh, You should totally add random team four star lines in your dbz stories (if you already do, then awesome)