i think this sis sutch an amazing story and i really hope theat you update it soon.
4/8/13 - Kari Moore

The content in this is great, but the english teacher inside me is screaming, "PUNCTUATION CAPITOLIATION AND PARAGRAPHS!". I bet a lot of other people don't mind it, but I'm just looking at your diolauge and thinking this. Great chapter, though. (:

I don't watch Teen Titans, but that was really great! (:

Hey! Alias is a bit of a Mary Sue in the way that she beat the enemy instantly, the implied tragic past, getting invited to stay with the Titans right away, so on. Also, there are some punctuation errors, for example, whenever a new person speaks, you skip a line, like this:

"Hi," person #1 said.

"Hey, what's up?" person #2 said.

A few places could use commas, but overall, it isn't horrible for a first story. Maybe a beta reader to catch any mistakes you can't find?

Not a flame, just trying to help out :)

PS. I was too lazy to log in, if you have any questions or want to flame me through PM or whatever, my penname is XFatalities-of-the-sane-mindsX

will there be more chapter if so please hurry i really like the story