|Reviews for Corridors of Time|
| Mouse-size-Dragon chapter 13 . 3/8/2016
I would just like to say that this is quite possibly the only Hidan redemption (and eventual relationship with Shikamaru) story that has ever been pulled off so well. For once I'm okay with it. I'm actually rooting for Hidan here! You've managed to redeem him well enough that him being in a loving relationship with Shikamaru, and having friendships with everyone else, is no longer weird, creepy, and/or unrealistic. Usually you read weird Stockholm syndrome or creepy rape-ish style relationships between the two, even when in completely alternate universes, that are (supposedly) 'loving'. Which is understandable as Hidan was a psycho and pretty irredeemably evil in canon. So bravo for you. (In my own writing immortality and centuries of life with no connection to anyone else almost always leads my character towards insanity, so I commend you for doing the opposite.) I like what you've done with the character. You're the only person to ever make me feel completely happy with a relationship between Hidan and Shikamaru so you're clearly an amazing writer.
Please continue this. I am anxiously awaiting the next twist in who has been re-incarnated and what they are doing now.
| Razell chapter 13 . 1/5/2016
Welcome back to Crazytown.
So, they're alive, I wasn't expecting that. Kankuro going wild on Deidara was understandable, considering what he believes happened.
Pein is really something, I wonder why he was hiding in there? That was a great fight scene, I'm not that good with them myself.
Zaku, Dosu and Kin get to show off their skills!
Great chapter, so many frustrating dead ends for our heroes, and new mysteries popping up. And a cliffhanger.
| general zargon chapter 13 . 1/5/2016
DUN DUN DUUUUUUN! Curse you, cliffhanger! As glad as I am for the update and that Deidara and Sasori survived (please keep them alive! *puppy dog eyes*), I'm mentally weeping because of the cliffhanger. T.T I like this story so far, and I hope that you have more spare time to work on it this year. Happy belated New Year! I wish you the best of luck on your writing!
| yamatomattkamiya chapter 4 . 1/2/2016
Actually I found the chapter quite amusing!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/18/2015
This is amazing! The Naruto cast is back! And then there's Hidan. As for Kakuzu... Well, I didn't miss him. Deidara and Sasori... It's sooooo SAD! The only ninja left is Hidan. Maybe he should be welcomed into the folds of Akatsuki... Again. He has changed so much, mentally. So much potential. I always wondered what would happen to him, 'cause he's immortal. But more importantly, why is the Naruto cast back from millennia ago? Except for Hidan, of course. Pls continue soon. Maybe it all has to do with the Rikido Sennin's eyes. They're very special.
| Razell chapter 12 . 4/28/2015
Zaku, Dosu and Kin were a great choice for the part. They've had miserable lives and had to do what it took to survive. That orphanage... That was just awful.
Neji is a jack-ass.
Poor Kakuzu... He never even had a chance. I know, cruel world, but I'm soft-hearted.
Now that Kankurou knows about Deidara, it seems he knows too much. Whoever's behind this probably now has at least one of the group in their radar. They seem to sophisticated not to have at least bugged Deidara's workshop. I fear things are going to get bad for the kids soon.
The scene with Sasori and Deidara was touching and sad.
If Zetsu appears, how in the world will you do that? Maybe a normal-looking guy with a Split-personality?
| Razell chapter 8 . 4/27/2015
I know of Clown, Vegapunk and Hojo, and I definitely do not trust those names... I fear we may soon find a name beginning with 'O' showing up. I hate that snake-faced pedo creep.
Ino is a Kamikaze driver and Zaku is a Kamikaze biker, put them in the same vehicle... Massive destruction.
More and More interesting.
I like the back story for Zaku, Dosu and Kin, being from the same orphanage and everything and growing close despite everything they've been through.
Kiba is a jerk, jumping ship the moment he saw Kankurou. Ino using Sai to make Sasuke jealous, (like that would ever happen)
Anyway, great story, hope to finish it soon.
| Razell chapter 3 . 4/26/2015
Zaku! Zaku is back! Dosu, Kin... They're back! For now, anyway...
I also love Kankurou, so I'm happy to see him again as well.
Typical Sakura/Ino reactions to the presence of Sasuke (or each other)
Hidan finally trying to come to grips with his pain, his misplaced faith and his old enemy. This should be interesting. I wonder if anyone will remember him. Zaku, Kin and Dosu had no way of knowing of him, having died before he appeared.
I like what I've read so far!
Hopefully I can read more tomorrow, it's very late here.
| general zargon chapter 12 . 3/13/2015
Hey there, I just wanted to say that I thought this story was pretty good, especially the idea that after so long buried alive that even Hidan would change for the better. :) I liked his personality in this AU, and I thought you wrote the modern versions for the other characters pretty well, and probably the only complaint I have is the fact that you had Hidan tell his secret so soon. Not to mention that I thought Shikamaru was a little too accepting, though I suppose it's kind of hard to argue with hard evidence, such as your boyfriend carrying on a normal conversation with a roast knife in his heart. :P This is kind of like a murder-mystery thing, except there's only one ninja. . I hope Deidara and Sasori survive, as they are two of my favorite characters from the Akatsuki. I totally didn't see Kakuzu being dead before the story even started coming, so kudos on throwing that curve-ball. I'm kind of hoping that Hidan gets a chance to show off his ninja skills soon, LOL, so I wish you the best of luck with your writing and I hope you continue this story!
| CRMGrimmi chapter 12 . 1/28/2015
Oh wow. The last part was so perfectly dramatic. It was wonderful :*) but it's sad. Very well done! Can't wait for the next one! Xxx
| CRMGrimmi chapter 11 . 11/9/2014
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next!
| 4701rose chapter 11 . 11/8/2014
XD YES! Oh god, so much fluff and yet so angstey
| kurofai-fan1 chapter 10 . 9/24/2014
For some reason I want to see hidan recieve a deadly wound(like his head getting cut off) in front of shikamaru and the others and then have to explain it to them. I like weird and awkward situations like that...
| InsaneMudkip chapter 10 . 8/14/2014
This story took me by surprise. A good surprise! It would be cool if everyone started to remember stuff from their past lives but your the writer, not me. Anyway update soon!
| ShinoHina4eva chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
D'aww, it's so cute. I like what you've done with this. And you have decent grammar and spelling! Out of curiosity, will we ever get an explanation for why all of them are alive again? And will they remember their past lives at all?