|Reviews for Corridors of Time|
| Razell chapter 12 . 4/28
Zaku, Dosu and Kin were a great choice for the part. They've had miserable lives and had to do what it took to survive. That orphanage... That was just awful.
Neji is a jack-ass.
Poor Kakuzu... He never even had a chance. I know, cruel world, but I'm soft-hearted.
Now that Kankurou knows about Deidara, it seems he knows too much. Whoever's behind this probably now has at least one of the group in their radar. They seem to sophisticated not to have at least bugged Deidara's workshop. I fear things are going to get bad for the kids soon.
The scene with Sasori and Deidara was touching and sad.
If Zetsu appears, how in the world will you do that? Maybe a normal-looking guy with a Split-personality?
| Razell chapter 8 . 4/27
I know of Clown, Vegapunk and Hojo, and I definitely do not trust those names... I fear we may soon find a name beginning with 'O' showing up. I hate that snake-faced pedo creep.
Ino is a Kamikaze driver and Zaku is a Kamikaze biker, put them in the same vehicle... Massive destruction.
More and More interesting.
I like the back story for Zaku, Dosu and Kin, being from the same orphanage and everything and growing close despite everything they've been through.
Kiba is a jerk, jumping ship the moment he saw Kankurou. Ino using Sai to make Sasuke jealous, (like that would ever happen)
Anyway, great story, hope to finish it soon.
| Razell chapter 3 . 4/26
Zaku! Zaku is back! Dosu, Kin... They're back! For now, anyway...
I also love Kankurou, so I'm happy to see him again as well.
Typical Sakura/Ino reactions to the presence of Sasuke (or each other)
Hidan finally trying to come to grips with his pain, his misplaced faith and his old enemy. This should be interesting. I wonder if anyone will remember him. Zaku, Kin and Dosu had no way of knowing of him, having died before he appeared.
I like what I've read so far!
Hopefully I can read more tomorrow, it's very late here.
| general zargon chapter 12 . 3/13
Hey there, I just wanted to say that I thought this story was pretty good, especially the idea that after so long buried alive that even Hidan would change for the better. :) I liked his personality in this AU, and I thought you wrote the modern versions for the other characters pretty well, and probably the only complaint I have is the fact that you had Hidan tell his secret so soon. Not to mention that I thought Shikamaru was a little too accepting, though I suppose it's kind of hard to argue with hard evidence, such as your boyfriend carrying on a normal conversation with a roast knife in his heart. :P This is kind of like a murder-mystery thing, except there's only one ninja. . I hope Deidara and Sasori survive, as they are two of my favorite characters from the Akatsuki. I totally didn't see Kakuzu being dead before the story even started coming, so kudos on throwing that curve-ball. I'm kind of hoping that Hidan gets a chance to show off his ninja skills soon, LOL, so I wish you the best of luck with your writing and I hope you continue this story!
| Grimmijaggers chapter 12 . 1/28
Oh wow. The last part was so perfectly dramatic. It was wonderful :*) but it's sad. Very well done! Can't wait for the next one! Xxx
| Grimmijaggers chapter 11 . 11/9/2014
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next!
| 4701rose chapter 11 . 11/8/2014
XD YES! Oh god, so much fluff and yet so angstey
| kurofai-fan1 chapter 10 . 9/24/2014
For some reason I want to see hidan recieve a deadly wound(like his head getting cut off) in front of shikamaru and the others and then have to explain it to them. I like weird and awkward situations like that...
| InsaneMudkip chapter 10 . 8/14/2014
This story took me by surprise. A good surprise! It would be cool if everyone started to remember stuff from their past lives but your the writer, not me. Anyway update soon!
| ShinoHina4eva chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
D'aww, it's so cute. I like what you've done with this. And you have decent grammar and spelling! Out of curiosity, will we ever get an explanation for why all of them are alive again? And will they remember their past lives at all?
| Midori no Kaori chapter 5 . 8/6/2014
"...I'll be silent as a grave" said by Azuma... I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE! XDD But man i dooo love this story, especially the way Hidan's character developed, he was soooo crazy before, but the way he turns "good" i think is probably the most appropraite, suitable, likely, and most likely the ONLY way for him to change. Wow, i love it! and i have to say,, SHIKAMARUUUU LOOOOVVEEE! XDD
| Grimmijaggers chapter 8 . 3/16/2014
I love this chapter. I'm pretty sure I squealed with happiness when you wrote 'he did have feelings for a young artist'. Though I'm pretty sure I was over reacting. And poor Hidan :( I hope he finds the answer and gets some sleep XP
| IMixDangerousChemicals chapter 8 . 1/18/2014
Oh. My. Log. Dammit, now you have to include everyone. Damn, I wonder how it'll be with Nagato. Are you going to include the six paths, as like adopted siblings or sixtuplets? Just an idea.
| Grimmijaggers chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
So perfect :3 update soon pwetty pwease
| Gingersnap87 chapter 7 . 11/26/2013
I think you made a good pace with this chapter and I agree that "torturing" Shikamaru with making him play DDR was enjoyable to read, not to mention his uncomfortable-ness in having to be so close to Hidan and not knowing how to confess it until the end. I think you worked perfectly getting them together despite the feelings of regret Hidan was having for his past doings. I'm happy they are finally together and can't wait to see how their relationship grows :) I can't really pick out anything that really bugs me, except I think there might be a little too much focusing on the lives of the side characters. Focusing some time on them isn't bad, but maybe a little more briefly so more of the chapter can be focused on the main pair. I don't mind you including details about the others, but too much makes me almost want to skip down to get to the main pair, but I do end up reading all the details, because I like this fic so much. But like you don't have to follow my suggestion, it's your fic after all, and just write in the way that best suits you 3