|Reviews for Fate Stay Unfinished|
| Dragonjek chapter 7 . 5/31
I... I like this.
You address his distortion-he's better, now, in some ways-but even all the effort going into him can't completely counter what had become the fundamental basis for his personality. He can't even be called selfless-selflessness is a *choice*. That he didn't involve himself until now is a stunning accomplishment.
| thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 3/12
you have a knack for writing this family chaos humor
| thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 3/12
it would be really cool to see a fic where kiritsugu summoned archer, angsty utilitarian saviors ftw!
| thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 3/12
its a shame this wasnt developed further, archer trolling camelot is quite funny and theres plenty f dramatic potential to balance it out if taken seriously
| thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 3/12
shirous way too traumatized to fit into a magical girl story...
| thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 3/12
i honestly expected this to be a tradgedy, with a broken shirou/harry in a world that was not his own
| thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 3/12
if i ever actually have the time to write, I should do a fic where harry enters the wizarding world with his views on magic defined by a separate fictional seires: i would probably use the dresden files since their more my thing, but the concept is too good to pass up but the nasuverse makes for some great morbid humor
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 3/12
servants of questionable heroism tend to be amusing
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 3/12
having the characters in the context of a somewhat normal family is absolutely hilarious!
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 3/12
the grail war's plotline does fit remakably well as a gang war...
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 3/12
this is really quite funny!
| Deathclaw 2015 chapter 7 . 3/9
Shirou is not distorted, he is just suffering from survivor's guilt.
| nanayoung chapter 8 . 12/15/2015
Looks like Archer is GAR for the king.
I really wished you continued this. Oh well.
| echo42 chapter 7 . 10/3/2015
I love when people write Shirou as 'distorted.' Shockingly, it's kinda rare. Kudos to you for that.
| ArcherShirou chapter 10 . 9/6/2015