Reviews for Fate Stay Unfinished
The Richmaster chapter 10 . 10/3/2016
You can't help but wonder what kind of new status quo would come from such a chaotic meeting
The Richmaster chapter 9 . 10/3/2016
I choose to believe that during the confrontation between Rin and Kuro, Shirou invited Archer in to get drunk with him
Dragonjek chapter 7 . 5/31/2016
I... I like this.

You address his distortion-he's better, now, in some ways-but even all the effort going into him can't completely counter what had become the fundamental basis for his personality. He can't even be called selfless-selflessness is a *choice*. That he didn't involve himself until now is a stunning accomplishment.
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 3/12/2016
you have a knack for writing this family chaos humor
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 3/12/2016
it would be really cool to see a fic where kiritsugu summoned archer, angsty utilitarian saviors ftw!
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 3/12/2016
its a shame this wasnt developed further, archer trolling camelot is quite funny and theres plenty f dramatic potential to balance it out if taken seriously
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 3/12/2016
shirous way too traumatized to fit into a magical girl story...
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 3/12/2016
i honestly expected this to be a tradgedy, with a broken shirou/harry in a world that was not his own
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 3/12/2016
if i ever actually have the time to write, I should do a fic where harry enters the wizarding world with his views on magic defined by a separate fictional seires: i would probably use the dresden files since their more my thing, but the concept is too good to pass up but the nasuverse makes for some great morbid humor
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 3/12/2016
servants of questionable heroism tend to be amusing
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 3/12/2016
having the characters in the context of a somewhat normal family is absolutely hilarious!
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 3/12/2016
the grail war's plotline does fit remakably well as a gang war...
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
this is really quite funny!
Deathclaw 2015 chapter 7 . 3/9/2016
Shirou is not distorted, he is just suffering from survivor's guilt.
nanayoung chapter 8 . 12/15/2015
Looks like Archer is GAR for the king.

I really wished you continued this. Oh well.
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