Reviews for Fate Stay Unfinished
Dragonjek chapter 7 . 5/31
I... I like this.

You address his distortion-he's better, now, in some ways-but even all the effort going into him can't completely counter what had become the fundamental basis for his personality. He can't even be called selfless-selflessness is a *choice*. That he didn't involve himself until now is a stunning accomplishment.
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 3/12
you have a knack for writing this family chaos humor
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 3/12
it would be really cool to see a fic where kiritsugu summoned archer, angsty utilitarian saviors ftw!
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 3/12
its a shame this wasnt developed further, archer trolling camelot is quite funny and theres plenty f dramatic potential to balance it out if taken seriously
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 3/12
shirous way too traumatized to fit into a magical girl story...
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 3/12
i honestly expected this to be a tradgedy, with a broken shirou/harry in a world that was not his own
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 3/12
if i ever actually have the time to write, I should do a fic where harry enters the wizarding world with his views on magic defined by a separate fictional seires: i would probably use the dresden files since their more my thing, but the concept is too good to pass up but the nasuverse makes for some great morbid humor
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 3/12
servants of questionable heroism tend to be amusing
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 3/12
having the characters in the context of a somewhat normal family is absolutely hilarious!
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 3/12
the grail war's plotline does fit remakably well as a gang war...
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 3/12
this is really quite funny!
Deathclaw 2015 chapter 7 . 3/9
Shirou is not distorted, he is just suffering from survivor's guilt.
nanayoung chapter 8 . 12/15/2015
Looks like Archer is GAR for the king.

I really wished you continued this. Oh well.
echo42 chapter 7 . 10/3/2015
I love when people write Shirou as 'distorted.' Shockingly, it's kinda rare. Kudos to you for that.
ArcherShirou chapter 10 . 9/6/2015
very good.
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