|Reviews for Unfolding a Plan|
| JustMe-Liz chapter 1 . 3/3
See, this seems way more logical than the episode. Because when David pulled away from Regina, I just kept thinking... who in the world would reject that woman?!
| lana-ismyqueen chapter 83 . 1/30
I seriously just sobbed because the stable queen and the evil charming and ow it hurts so much but it was literally perfect and oh I don't know if I can recover from this.
| EvilRegal18 chapter 84 . 1/28
I just read this whole entire story in like a couple of days and I loved it so much! It made me angry and happy and it made me cry and it was just amazing and I just LOVE it! One of the best things I have ever read!
| liliesandroses chapter 84 . 12/26/2013
I just read this fic from start to finish again (I remember getting excited for updates all the time) and I cried, especially chapter fic is still amazing a year later...great job on it, its the best EC fic I ever read.
| kika210 chapter 68 . 11/4/2013
| kika210 chapter 67 . 11/4/2013
“What day is it?” – might be the best line ever, hahaha
| kika210 chapter 66 . 11/4/2013
"Kind of like a bonus feature on a DVD", hahaha I love it! And will happily be checking that out later :D
| kika210 chapter 65 . 11/4/2013
They never did get a chance to break in her office before, did they? “You haven’t even been back in this office for forty eight hours!” haha & good on them
I love that he gets so distracted with just a bit of lace :D
| kika210 chapter 64 . 11/4/2013
Tamara's in the picture... dun, dun, DUN!
| kika210 chapter 63 . 11/4/2013
There was a moment that I was really nervous that Snow was going to tell James that she’s pregnant. I don’t know why it popped into my head, but I was just like ‘no, pleeeease don’t let it be that!’
I must say, that aside from it being great that Regina has a good relationship with her son & they have many moments where they’re all smiles & giggles, it’s nice that Regina feels like she can be herself with him around Emma. Sometimes people don’t let their true selves be seen in front of those they are at odds with, though children usually help break it out. It just further shows how far she’s come with Emma…
“It was like she had never tried to give her a cursed apple turnover.” Hahaha couldn’t have said it better myself :D
| kika210 chapter 62 . 11/4/2013
Oh da fluff! The first part got me all nostalgic… waking up to a soft grey sunlit room, in a silent house with just the sound of the rain streaming off the roof & splashing into puddles below that are continuously increasing in size… ugh I loved mornings like that – as long as it was a weekend & I could vegetate in my bed with that ambience it was perfect.
I like how Regina’s playing with James’ fingers much in the same way that Henry previously did with Regina’s – cuteness.
Glad to see James isn’t letting Regina wallow in her sadness & that he’s doing whatever it takes to get a smile on her face. And I love seeing them with Henry, playing happy family.
| kika210 chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
Your words play out so well in my head! I actually cracked up laughing at this part:
"over the intercom she heard Emma in the background, "wait! She's in there with David! Nu-uh I'm goin in there!" Which was followed by her assistant's useless pleas for her to stay."
| kika210 chapter 49 . 11/4/2013
Oh man, there were so many hilarious things in this chapter! All the “oh my god”s that Regina spouted trying to deal with her mom being exposed to modern technology, lol. Sounds like me attempting to explain to my parents how to switch the TV from ATV to HDMI!
“Cora watched her daughter yell into the little box as though she was having a conversation with it.” Hahahaha! Reminded me of people using hands-free headsets… even though I know they’re on the phone, it’s always unsettling to come across them cause it just seems like they’re some crazy person talking to themselves.
What I didn’t get was why Regina would tell Cora that she has a man in her life & that everyone knows who it is & that it would be so easy for her to find out, etc. I kept thinking, ‘why is she feeding Cora all this information when she’s so freaked out about her killing him?!’ I guess she just wanted to shove it in Cora's face that she's not alone, etc. Which I can understand.
| kika210 chapter 48 . 11/4/2013
I remember when I saw that scene on the show (where “Henry” goes in search of his mom) & was SOOOO bummed that it was Cora in disguise. Not just because it would have been great for Regina to feel that her son still loved her, but also because the last thing Regina would want her mother to see is just how badly she wants/needs the love of her son, how vulnerable (“weak”) she is to his affection. No one wants their enemy to see them at their lowest, most depressed point. Then to be tricked into a moment of happiness by that enemy on top of that – ugh, terrible!
That scene was slightly less gut-wrenching in this story cause Regina & Henry’s relationship is doing really well, but it still sucked to read her go through that :(
| kika210 chapter 61 . 11/3/2013
The paragraph where Regina says “stop” three times… daaang it was good.
Proud of Henry for standing up for his mom & I like how Regina thought to put a distress charm, or whatever, on him. I’m not gonna lie though, at first I thought she was responding to some sort of mother’s intuition & thought that was extremely cool. But magic’s cool too, lol.