|Reviews for Falling|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
Please will there be more? :D
| Charlie Moosefeather chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
| Mrs. Shanique Volturi-Whitlock chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Good story so far i liked the first chapter and im totally gonna follow this story to see where u take it
| XxZessxX chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Very interesting. Speed and Lash are idiots. If someone would heve been there they would have big problems. But at the first day the risk isn't that high, is it?
So Will is depressive. That's not so good...
And Warren wants revenge. Use Will to break the Commander is not the worst idea, I didn't like that but the plan could work. Well if he has one xD
You plan to make a Warren/Will slash, don't you? For me it sounds like that and I like the idea :D I like the pairing.
Let me guess: Warren wants revenge and btw he fall in love with Will. He recognize that he start to care about Will. Then there is this problem, on the one side his plans for revenge on the other his feelings for Will.
But The Commander will be really shocked if he finds out that his arch enemys son is the only person who can make Will as happy as he is :D I never read a faniction in which Wills parents find out that their son and Warren are a couple -.- I would love to read that xD
Ok I'm too fast right!? I'll stop guessing and wait fore more of this ;)
I hope you post the next chapter soon. I already like this :D
| Bronzeshipping chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Haha, I was just looking up Will and Warren fanfics and then I noticed the number changed from 53 to 54 and I thought I was going crazy, but then I noticed that someone else had just posted a new story. XD
But anyways, great job with the beginning of the story, I can't to see what happens next, I'm getting all excited already! More please! :3