Reviews for The Mary Spence story
Guest chapter 25 . 9/10/2013
"...we loose and old and dear friend"
That's okay, so long as we don't lose him.
jecollins201 chapter 25 . 2/18/2013
Love this story and the Trails end story. Would like to see more stories of the Mccullough's family soon.
Rislanderinks chapter 25 . 1/16/2013
I so enjoyed this story! Your characters felt very real. I am sorry Major Adams is gone though. He could have been a wonderful grandfather for the boys. I guess ol' Charlie Wooster will have to fill those shoes now.

I hope you post the sequel soon. I'm jonesing for another good Wagon Train story . . . ;)

Thank you for the entertainment.

-laura
Annie Jones chapter 25 . 1/16/2013
I absolutely loved loved loved this story! Im so sad to see it end but glad you promised to revisit this family. Please write more!
gaben chapter 25 . 1/15/2013
A great story and plot idea reagarding both the fate of the Major and Flint exit from the series. I would have liked to think that flint found a home and love and contentment, though with those three boys, contentment may be a little bit of a stretch. I'd like to hear more about Flin't growing family, especially the baby... a girl I hope.
gaben chapter 24 . 1/15/2013
They so desrved that. Fire is a killer. Its a winder the rest of the Wagon train didn't have them skinned alive.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/14/2013
you are a good story teller, you have to write more soon. please.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/13/2013
Thank you, Can't wait for the sequel! My favorite character was Bill.
Lajoci chapter 25 . 1/13/2013
Wonderful story! The character development and additions to the Wagon Train family has been a great read. While it was sad to read of Major Adam's death, it was a lovely end.

Will be happy to read new adventures. Thank you.
IMSLES chapter 25 . 1/13/2013
Aw, how sad at their loss, but no finer place to have an eternal resting spot.

I love how you made arrangements for the family to stay together every year.

I look forward to more adventures on the ranch.

Well done!

Sue
wandamarie chapter 25 . 1/12/2013
wow it was a great story thanks keep up the great work
Miss MaryAnn chapter 25 . 1/12/2013
That was a very satisfying ending of your story but I wish Seth Adams hadn't died. I am looking forward to your next story.
valerie from france chapter 25 . 1/12/2013
Like a good movie, when we love a story, we never want it to end. it was a real pleasure even with the death of a character. well, even for a sad way, the words are beautiful. many thanks.
I'm really waiting for the new story of McCullough's...
ullswater chapter 25 . 1/12/2013
Thank you for writing this story, I have enjoyed reading it, the end is a bit abrupt in my opinion but that's not a critisim as it's your story and you tell it how you want to. Sad to be saying goodbye to Mr Adams though!
dippycippy chapter 25 . 1/12/2013
Ty was beautiful and I can't wait for the next story. Hope it's soon
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