Reviews for Requite My Love
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
Did Renée have Bella later in life in this story? The way you made it seem was that there were ten to fifteen years between each of them, with Renée being the oldest. Simply from the thoughts that Bella had, that Edward was really young when her mom grabbed him. I figured him in his early twenties and Renée in her early thirties. Then they had ten years of marriage before she passed . . . this is set two years after her death, so Edward should be mid thirties. Yet, he said he was pushing forty? I was wondering how his family would feel if they pursued this relationship but, you conveniently added in that everyone he has is gone. So is everyone for her. Except they have each other. I did like that Renée essentially gave Bella the go ahead in some of her last words . . . I wonder if she tried to do the same with Edward? I liked this.
ChristianMom54 chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
I'm so glad I pulled up this old contest and read this story. I enjoyed it so much; thank you for sharing your talent.
Debbie in S. Florida chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
Wow. I wasn't sure what to expect with this one, but you surpassed all expectations. You are a wonderful writer, not that I didn't know that already. You made what could've been a raunchy, taboo subject into something that had genuine emotion and you made me root for her. And it was hot as hell, even though they didn't do more than kiss (but oh, what kisses they were!)!
I have to think I'm not the first to ask if you would consider continuing this. I would absolutely love to see what they face going forward with their relationship, now that he's finally accepted that it's going to happen. It surely wouldn't be an easy road, but I'd love to read about it!
Koshivuh chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
I loooooved this. So much :D I would love to see a sequel or some kind of continuation.
RobLover21 chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Once again I loved it and it left me wanting more of their future thanks for sharing!
morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Wonderful short story. It would be so awesome to read more about them, but at the same time the ending is surprisingly satisfying. Thanks for sharing. xo
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Oh too bad we don't have more
HawraaN chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
wow such chemistry. fate just happens
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Oh that was fantastic! You captured the moments and emotions between Bella/Edward perfectly for the scenario.

Well done!
Crystalena chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I loved it! I wish there was a bit what happens when they get back home tonight? But even without a lemon, that was quite hot ;) I live in OC and Laguna Beach is about 20 to 30 min. from my home, so it was kind of cool to read a ExB fic taking place in a familiar area :)
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I loved it wow she fell in love with her step dad but you can't help who you fall in love with thank you
littlebunny4 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Wow this story was amazing and there wasn't even a lemon! Would love to see it continued though.
Teresa R chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Love comes from many directions Thanks for a great story
tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Loved it:) Thanks for sharing.
zkcej chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
is it bad that i want to read the conytinuation of this waaaa lolll

nice one :)
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