Reviews for Light Me Up
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 1 . 9/19
Really enjoyed! Maybe there will be more chapters later? Would love to see what happens with them!
cullenlover88 chapter 1 . 9/18
nice
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 8/25
Would love to see this continued for a few more chapters!
Caliborn96 chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
it was okay. wish it was longer and had a little bit more character development.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
Really hot. More?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
Just an FYI, breathing actually is not one of the five senses.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
Whore
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
That was boring and the ending is shit.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
continue this story please
kagome0561 chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
Oh please please PLEASE continue this story. I know its a one shot, but I would love to see more of this.
RobLover21 chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
Loved it I would love to have more of this story! Thanks for writing it, I loved the passion between the two characters.
SunflowersAtSunset chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
It did leave me hanging, breathless, the not knowing what happened afterwards. But DANGING HAWWWWT. I felt like I was being introduced to this another world. This Edward sure was yummy. Blush. Well, I need to say this was terrific, I really liked all the ST(sexual tension) I thought it was pretty flawless, the characters and the writing.
Warm kisses form Florida, not as warm as having a crazy night with Edward, but meh something is something.
bamagal110 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
That was the hottest sex scene I have ever read, you are the lemon queen...woo I am gonna go smoke...lol
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Wow, the heat from this fic has warmed up my entire bedroom. Hella good.
Dolly.Reader chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
What a romp!

That was beyond hot.
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