|Reviews for Turn in my Arms|
| Daydreams-About-Fallen-Stars chapter 1 . 2/10
WOW! AMAZING. OMG. asdfghjk. omfg. the feels.
| TealFeatheredFangirl chapter 1 . 1/6
Awww! Love a good bit of that lot!
| Didget chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
haha thankyou for the dication, just realised my computer didn't process any of the reviews i left last time i read fanfiction on it -_- so here it is.
OMG i love it, the tension is just amazing and also really happy :P which is nice. lol i love and hate how both characters see themselves and get scared because they can't read each others emotionals probably because they think them being together will never happen.
And as per usual your writing of boths characters is fantastic and i just love how Gill is tough-girl and sarcastic. love it :)
| CaleighWho chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Omg omg omg omg! This is amazing! please make a chapter 2?! Ohhh please?! For me, pretty please! I love this so much! You wrote Gill/Rachel soo well! Please don't make it a one-shot! xox
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
THANKYOU! ahh i love the smuttness! :P
lol again, it amazing :)
| Katherine chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Hello, sorry I would write the review from my account but my phone doesn't let me so I've had to do it as a guest.
I actually love this 3 I read it 3 times. Your description is so good. The whole Gill smile and all of that.
It is amazing! Please please please write more!
| Sazzy.x.x chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
asdfghjkl This has massively cheered me up! Aww gotta love a bit of Rachel and Gill, this is wonderful and the beginning properly gave me butterflies too :3 The awkwardness was spot on, love it! :)
| xmellyxox chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
this is really good! :D
pleeease say there's going to be another chapter?;D
| Me again chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Sorry, hate reviewing on my phone, it's so clumsy, pressed post by accident! Anyway, Rachel's awkwardness, it's so subtle and so true to the characters.
The way you build it up is adorable, and at the same time it make me want to smile and cry, it's just perfect!
Well done, already waiting for more;-) another chapter perhaps? Or is that pushing it? And thank you for the dedication thingy, I only nag you because your writing is so wonderful, there's only one other person on the whole of fanfiction I beg to update as much as I beg you;-)
| HedgieX chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Sorry it's not signed in, I'm on my phone. Also sorry for any blabbering.
I tried to read it at lunch but couldn't get a decent signal, so I looked forward to it all the way through maths;-)
Oh God, you know those books where you get a little story for each day of the year? I could do with one of those for your stories, only I'd have read them all by the end of January! ANYWAY.
Your writing is so beautiful. There's all the details that nobody ever really picks up on in human behaviour sort of slotted into the story. You write them so well, Gill's snappiness to hide something else and Rachel's
| GigglingGirl chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Oh my fish, MANDA! This was just amazing. I cannot tell you how much I love you for this. It was simply fantastic. I felt the excitement, the tension, the awkwardness and the absolute connection between the two women. It was perfect. I can never get over how detailed you writing is and the way you describe things. It makes my English-literature-student heart melt due to its sheer brilliance. This was so fabulous it's unreal! Wowwiee! Xxx