Actually, there is a VERY good reason why the furniture on the Knight Bus isn’t bolted or stuck in place - given the very poor inertial compensation the bus has, if the furniture didn’t move, passengers would be violently flung out of their seats. Even the heightened durability of magicals might not save people from broken bones if that happened, and they’d certainly be badly bruised. But heavy furniture has enough mass to absorb the inertial effects when the bus changes direction suddenly, and that keeps people safe(r).

Meeting Cousin Tonks is a relief rather than his mother's side.

I was going to talk about this chapter where you had a Freudian? "Princess McGonagall", but since you are never coming back...sigh
It was a good idea. I realize that Uni and life after is quite full and busy. Perhaps someday you will want to come back and rework this one. You might have a opus magnus on your hands!

Just one of the grammatical issues - "You-Know-Who's servants,"

The story is really starting to move forward now. It's a really good idea, even if the background is very AU. You did have trouble with where periods and commas should go in this chapter.

Enjoyable story.
A pity you stopped writing.

I liked the explanation of why no one apparates to the station.

I understand writers block very well... I keep going back to a story I started in my 20s (1972, if you must know), and here I am, 70 and still stuck on chapter 21... and all up to 21 have been re-done multiple times... 50 ruddy years, and I was published in Mayfair, Parade and Playboy... plus a few others... back then...
I can write porn but clean stuff still gives me problems... But I must say, this story was good, and fun... I would re-write it... but trust me - year 4 or 5 would have had Tonks and Harry bonking like bunnies...
One point, your chapter 15 up to year one start, should have been your prologue... all the info was important, (Sirius, Tonks parents, Black family etc), Sorry, it was like starting Game of Thrones at Episode 5... or Flash without the pilot episode... I liked your style of writing, it's very good. Thank you for the closing wrap-up. It was at the least, a welcome bit of closure. Not perfect, but good enough...

Re the notes, I would humbly disagree... Voldemort was indeed powerful, but in canon, he always, (with the exception of Godrics Hollow, and as no one was there to tell the story, we don't know...) he always sends in the troops first. Like the old Scottish saying, 'Come out you coward, there's only ten of us.' Even in the graveyard, facing a 14 year old, who had just run a maze and fought creatures, tied to a grave and bled, Voldemort still tortured him before giving him back his wand...
(Yep... Gladiator, the emperor stabbed him while tied up, then faced him.)
So, I think he waited till bones was exhausted, then brave Tommy stepped up and killed her... (The Ministry fight - when did Tommy turn up - oh yeah... after the fighting was nearly over, then he ran away after a brief battle... if Albus had used the killing curse instead of defensive magic - I think we all know how that would have gone...

I always thought that even in canon that Dumbledore was either a bit senile or an ounce short of a pound... not really evil, just thoughtless. Like chess... my mate never wins because he sacrificed so many pieces he was left with nothing to play with, and nobody could convince him that he was wrong... and that's Albus... I may not be right, but I'm never wrong...

And still lost... did something happen to Tonks parents? No Andromeda or Ted?

A bit difficult to follow at times. No real explanation of Sirius, is he an escapee, or did he never get caught? Tonks is in her last year meaning she's 16 or 17, but lives alone in her own flat? Need a better prologue... one with some information in it.
I like the story, but honestly, it's a bit confusing in places.

Loved this, sad to see it was never finished but the fifteen chapters written were great and I thoroughly endorse more writers detailing the eventual plot line when they abandon a story

I loved it all and thank you for writing out the plot for the rest of it so it doesn't just end here

Obvously it's incredibly unlikely that you will return to writing this so I wont bother asking you to, but I want to thank you for the fifteen chapters you did write and for including the outline at the end.