Reviews for Nerve Damage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Alright, thanks for the story but I'll drop it here and won't read it again. I really didn't know what was in the author's mind here. He started strong by making Shirou unique with multiple servants and guess what ? The author just kills his uniqueness by adding multiple servant rules for other masters, making this a regular holy grail war instead. Yep, definitely a killing move there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh, as good as this started out, i was skimming sonce ch8. It just got boring so i can see why it was dropped |
![]() ![]() Shinji getting cut in half by a magical chainsaw is hilarious and a fitting end for that worm |
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![]() ![]() Dropped |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really good story. Even if many things doesn’t make sense the fact that it actually tried to show just how dangerous certain servants can be was really good. A caster scathach and merlin plus a sane heracles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is glorious. An unnerfed heracles |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait is he trained by that cordington guy with fairy eyes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Protection against arrows should have saved lance but why not go ahead. This is entertaining |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ATTENTION Everyone Our Blessed Brother Little Brotherhood Studios known for Christian Bionicles Videos has helped to sign and share our petition for a new Fate Route Anime Reboot/Remake! So Everyone please help to sign and share our online appeal - Fate/Stay Night, Fate Route Remake by Ufotable. Just search on Google Fate/Stay Night, Fate Route Remake by Ufotable sign the petition, share it with friends and family and convince them to sign and share it too. And Pray! Pray for our Dear brother! Pray that his up coming Bionicles project - Bionicles Project Toa will be a success! Pray that it will also help serve The LORD'S Plan! Pray to the one True LORD and God Jesus, that the Anime Route gets Remade/Rebooted but more importantly, that it too will also help serve The LORD'S Plan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was recommended to me by a lot of people. It's a perfect example for other authors to learn from. This author had a good premise, and they absolutely murdered it. They made every possible wrong choice writing this fic. This was meant to be crack, but it started taking itself seriously. Shirou was too OP, so the author decided to even the odds while breaking the rules of the universe without addressing them. This was meant to be crack, so Shirou being OP would have been fine and the story should have ended by chapter 4 or 5 or turned into a humorous slice of life. Also, character bloat. By chapter 6, I lost track of what's going on in this fic, there were too many characters, and Shirou and co themselves barely got 3 or 4 scenes from chapter 6 to chapter 12. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT?! 4 SABER?! that's just not fair. really. not fair |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really sad to see this amazing story hasn't been updated since 2012. I really enjoyed reading it but I hope you are doing okay and that you come back to this at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fights man especially napoleon vs gilgamesh and I can only imagine how samson and Moses would react to merlin and sakura assassin considering merlin father and assassin goal |