|Reviews for Nerve Damage|
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/14
YEEES3 its so goood
When is the next chapter coming out?
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/14
I'm probably waay too late for this, but damn thats good to read
| Silver566 chapter 7 . 4/14
| Ranmaleopard chapter 12 . 4/8
My god this is just really interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue
| Shahzeb chapter 12 . 4/8
well great story and you really know how to write character interactions and conversations. even the combat scenes are well written. the only criticism would be that the story became too cluttered because of too many characters and their respective plots still it is a shame that this story is abandoned anyways thanks for the read.
| Shahzeb chapter 6 . 4/7
well great concept and had a nice start but progressively got messier with the inclusion of too many characters you should have finished the Grail war and focused on OP shirous life in the nasuverse anyways that's just my thoughts in the end it's your story and from the looks of it is abandoned still thanks for the read.
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/26
I'm loving it. Alter is always so cute -
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/25
This is soo good!
I'm loving it so far
| W8W chapter 12 . 3/21
We meet Rin new servants. About Caesar I can only say that his meeting Nero will be interesting. White death may be able to summon snow like Jackie mist. I can him taking solo Waver servants armies. Gilgamesh battle with Napoleon was awesome. We see difference in how they see weapons. Gil hate losing his treasures, Napoleon see them as tools. Cannons may be younger but they are by nature more powerful than ordinary swords, also Napoleon have all while Gil only what he see as worthy. Speech was impressive and make we wonder how it will affect future. Other battle was also impressive but didn't make me think so much.
Excellent story I am sorry that according to "tv tropes" it ended even before we meet all servants. Great mix of comedy and action.
| W8W chapter 11 . 3/21
Look like there will be lots of troubles because Archer was away, he don't know that ND Shirou already know that he can't save everyone and have to sometime kill. Him worrying about Alter with what he know because she give evil overlord vibe but she is simply much more ruthless compared to Saber, like Archer compared to Shirou. Ilya interactions with her servants are so cute. If what Jordan say is true then Waver followed his king example closely. Gilgamesh make his appearance, he will work alone because of his ego so defeating him will be bit easier.
| W8W chapter 10 . 3/21
Sakura servants are excellent to gather informations, Rider can fly really fast and Assassin is obvious. All of the battles were impressive but my favorite is sane Hercules. If Siegfried didn't have his sword and could match his enemy strength he would die. Nemean lion skin was also impervious to attack but he was killed. Henry servants are definitely powerful but there only two of them, Shirou have much more. I predict that lack of prana will be main weakness of this two. Achilles will definitely want piece of Hercules.
| W8W chapter 9 . 3/20
What stopped Aabidah NP avalon, all this nerve circuits make Shirou immune or something else? Assassin is angry and with her knowing it is justified. I think she will become friendlier when she learn what kind of person Shirou is. About saving he did as much if not more in this department, help unknowable with mental health for years and broke war so Aabidah could be summoned at all. When graal nature will be revealed heroes will decade to stop it so assassin will be ally. Shirou and Sakura talk is really heartwarming. Another awesome fight scene. Omake was great. So Archer is from another timeline how will he react on all of it?
| W8W chapter 8 . 3/20
Airlines Lancelot are hilarious, best part is fact that servants treat it like it is normal flight. Waver journey isn't much better, this two are really instant buddies. Aabidah helped Sakura a lot but didn't finish Zouken he will probably return. We have probably ultimate assassin here or at least most versatile.
| W8W chapter 7 . 3/20
Lionstone is awesome character and his mad bomber tendencies are really funny. Way in which he is treating Jackie will give him her loyalty even if he will not understand her fully. I don't think that Napoleon will hold grudge, he will rather respekt his master stranght of conviction. Is there any servant that given opportunity to eat will not behave as black hole?
Lovia servants reaktion on king Arthur x3 will be super funny. Extra points if first meeting will be with alternate version of her.
Lancelot: My king about matter with Guinevere.
Lily: What about you wife?
I can see them getting along with Shirou team. Merlin making bodies may allow lots of servants to stay after war. Luvia will definitely try marry Shirou after learning what he did and have no magus family to get this power for her family (Rin will not be happy).
Waver meeting with his king is nice to watch also his team is most cooperative other tried fighting on the beginning.
Scathach will be fun to watch so far she is either awesome or funny.
Ancient have best chance to get what he wants, theatre exist NPs that can kill immortals.
| W8W chapter 6 . 3/20
Shinji fate is so satisfying to watch in this chapter. Shirou have more realistic view on life here, he may not be at risk of becoming archer. Nero sword should rival weapons of other Sabers so I have no problem with it strength. Way it become rage of vulcano in sword form is cool, it strongest abilities come from god blessing so no problem here.