|Reviews for Nerve Damage|
| Angel of Atonement chapter 12 . 3/26
This was one of the best fics I've read when it comes to making those ridiculous and lengthy fight scenes of Fate engaging and fun. All your Heroic Spirits are great to read too, and the care you've taken to make this into an exciting twist with believable characters is great. For this chapter, i thought your match up of Napoleon against Gilgamesh was fantastically written and your use of his Charisma to nudge the King of Heroes onto a new path came across very well. I guess there's no continuation after this, but it was a wonderful read. My thanks.
| slytherinmypants chapter 10 . 3/15
Looks like you wrote yourself into a corner by introducing so many masters.
| slytherinmypants chapter 6 . 3/10
Damn this fic is just too OP, pls keep writing when you have time!
| luluvibritania chapter 3 . 2/13
just to let you know his servants are dead(Spirits) except Blue Saber who was dying but still alive and not a spirit so red white and black should all be capable of astralizing
| BattleshipFusou chapter 12 . 2/3
Holy shit Napolean's fight was fucking awesome. I will suggest some music for that scene. As such I personally recommend the song "Soldiers" by Otherwise for the scene. It matches up really well, especially with Napolean's kickass speech of defiance.
| Lord Jace chapter 12 . 1/22
Although by now its likely impossible, I really hope you finish this someday.
| ObsessivelyObsessiveObsession chapter 4 . 1/21
Making Shirou OP only to make everyone else OP seems really redundant. Shirou's only edge in this war is his prana, but you've gone and negated it by adding more servants.
| ObsessivelyObsessiveObsession chapter 1 . 1/21
Okay, a few things that are wrong with this chapter.
All of this boils down to one thing, really. Why is Shirou doing the exact same thing that he was doing in canon before the battle? I'm pretty sure that him being a grossly overpowered Magus would've resulted in enough change pre story start that events would've been unrecognizable. First, Rin would've probably taken notice of him. She would've been a slightly different person because of this. This would've resulted in her summoning her servant at a different time, perhaps a completely different servant (because, let's be honest here, Shirou shouldn't have died in the same way, so he shouldn't have been resurrected by Rin, and therefore she wouldn't have had the connection with the jewel to summon Archer.). Next, why would Archer even exist? Shirou should've been a different person with different experiences at this point, due to the changes his power would've brought him. Therefore, even should he have been a Counter Guardian again, it wouldn't have been the EMIYA of canon. Third, these things, and many more, would've resulted in the events leading to the battle between Lancer and Archer to change, likely resulting in them not fighting at that time at all. Finally, as I said, Shirou would've experienced different things at this point, would've been, at the very least, a slightly different person. His actions and ability would've differed vastly, and yet, for some reason, nothing has changed from canon. Sure, he put up more of a fight but, in the end, nothing has changed.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
Too all of you who are reading this sadly he is not continuing this. However within the reviews if you search hard enough it show s what would happen later
| pg2016 chapter 12 . 10/15/2016
yes please continue updating this beautiful insanity of a story
| correnhimself316 chapter 9 . 9/19/2016
Jesus as a servant...that is a scary thought.
| correnhimself316 chapter 3 . 9/19/2016
The level of FOOD produced sounds like it has effects similar to what the Living Heroic Spirit Chuck Norris has on women, just by being near them.
| JumpingToaster chapter 12 . 9/6/2016
The story can feel like too much is happening too quickly but it is still good.
| zellfer1 chapter 4 . 9/1/2016
can i just say that implerial privilege is a broken skill? shame it never came into play in extra
| Broken Ascendent chapter 12 . 7/29/2016
Too bad its dead