Reviews for Nerve Damage
tkorn1001 chapter 11 . 7/15/2023
you know even with the mana cost to maintain servants going down shirou still has a huge advantage by virtue of hi still having 4 servants to everyone else's 2 or 3 and him having a monstrous amount of mana so they can use there noble phantasm more recklessly oh and shirou being potentially capable of fatally wounding servants.
tkorn1001 chapter 9 . 7/14/2023
ND shirou was pretty fun to watch
tkorn1001 chapter 6 . 7/14/2023
Yooooooo shinji dead let's go
tkorn1001 chapter 2 . 7/14/2023
That bit with saber mentioning shiro sensei sounding like more makes me wonder it it really is merlin
tkorn1001 chapter 1 . 7/14/2023
the fact that he was able to hurt lancer and was even capable of forcing him to use his noble phantasm tells me he has a better chance at beating a servant then he thinks. But anyways awesome story to bad its dead
Makimass chapter 5 . 2/23/2023
could've just stuck to one servant each masters if you're going to try to equalize the war lol
Asreal Dreemer chapter 12 . 1/2/2023
This… WAS AWESOME!
Not that I expected it to be anything else.
Thank you for making this story, for it is the stuff that would earn YOU a place in the Throne of Hero’s.
guestinator chapter 4 . 12/9/2022
Damn it why is he always a bitch filled pussy that refuses to kill?! Why is he always some retard when even Harry fucking Potter kills?!
musashi566 chapter 12 . 12/6/2022
Just wondering, sure the grail can sustain more summonings but can the masters do the same? Shirou has enough prana to support four servants, and the grail is taking the brunt of the cost for maintaining the servants... However, that doesn't mean the masters can support four servants... do they all have enough prana to keep their servants at full power and use their Noble Phantasm? I don't think you've actually thought about it very carefully... you're literally making everyone a magic factory, which renders what makes Shirou unique in this story moot. Magic capacity is no longer a thing, and your story is named after his uniqueness...you remove that, then where does that leave you? Started skimming most of the story once you mentioned multiple servants for everyone because I can already picture the exact scenario mentioned above, and I'm not surprised it did end up that way.
Axccel chapter 2 . 10/26/2022
It occurred to me that Bazett sending Lancer after Shirou in this fic would have gotten her executed by the moderator of the war if she was extremely lucky. First, it's not hard to imagine that killing a non-master magus is a huge no-no that the excuse of fighting the war will not excuse you from as non-master magi are very much not part of it. Second, considering the ritual needs all the Servants, killing a master before he or she has summoned a servant would make the ritual impossible for that war and therefore the master responsible would definitely wish they had died after the Magus Association gets their hands on the fool. Bazett did BOTH of these things.
Axccel chapter 1 . 10/26/2022
Ah, the most glorious sacred chainsword!
grant.walker581 chapter 12 . 9/23/2022
dang... it's really sad this amazing story isn't being updated.
Mukuro234 chapter 12 . 9/17/2022
Awesome!
Nakashi Blezmer chapter 8 . 8/20/2022
opertunity mised? i think not next story!
Nakashi Blezmer chapter 6 . 8/20/2022
and the death of the matou bastards
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