Reviews for Nerve Damage
Nakashi Blezmer chapter 6 . 8/20/2022
i like fluff
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2022
Interesting. Only critique is to mitigate the amount of plot armor for everyone.
TheLostArchivist chapter 12 . 6/13/2022
The Gilgamesh/Napoleon battle was definitely something for the history books. Half, ahem, *height*-measuring contest and half philosophy, it just felt perfectly suited to them.

And Bazett took the offer. Haha...
TheLostArchivist chapter 7 . 6/13/2022
I gotta say, I'm really rooting for more Jordan now. The man's a riot. Everyone, though, has what have to be simultaneously the most powerful and zany servants possible, and it's great!
I really wish this story weren't dead... and/or was on a different site... Sure, there's SB, but no threadmarks.
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 12 . 6/13/2022
The only problem with this story is that it is all over the place. I was good for the beginning chapters, then you lost me after like chapter 7. I have only watched three routes of fate stay night and fate zero so I had no idea who any of these new characters were. But just because you have iskandor, I’ll let it slide. Also You made Alter a small tsundere.
DarkBan chapter 12 . 5/30/2022
It's a shame you stoped writting this story, ijust found it aa few hour ago, and it's HIGHLY entertaining xD
Would have loved to see more of it, but i sstill thank you for the time and effort you put into writting and sharing it :)
Hope you're well, and have a good day!
Zero chapter 6 . 5/15/2022
YES YES YES
Zero chapter 3 . 5/15/2022
Four servants...
For all masters ?
DAMN.
Zero chapter 2 . 5/15/2022
SAIKOU NO COOL!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/26/2022
Super lame. Don't make Shirou so strong if it requires you to break the world's logic to keep it interesting.
Joe chapter 5 . 12/23/2021
If other masters can now summon 4 shirou should now be able to summon 16
Joe chapter 2 . 12/23/2021
8 researched the human body has over 7 TRILLION nerves shirou is OP
Pimity chapter 5 . 12/17/2021
whats the point of writing the story the way it is if youre just gonna equalize the playing field? shirou can summon multiple servants? everybody can now summon multiple servants. whats next, everyone is given a few thousand magic circuits to be even with shirou? pointless. so utterly pointless.
Cross69 chapter 7 . 12/16/2021
lu but?
Waterflames3 chapter 7 . 10/30/2021
That interaction between Ghengis Khan and Iskandar is heart warming. I’m genuinely shocked Fate hasn’t implemented him as a character.
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