Reviews for My Darkest Year
IZZY-CHAN13 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
The sentences seemed rather choppy for me to tell a somber story (Choppier lines are better for an action sequence). Too much was compressed into one chapter, which makes for a good summary at best. I did like that the characters were "in character" and the bit by the end about the accusations about them "being gay" made my blood boil if only slightly (it was more of a simmer); just because two guys show emotional attachment to each other (like girls usually do) it doesn't make them gay (I know that's not what you were getting at, but I felt like diving into some social commentary lol)... just like the affection given to Son by a Father doesn't count as incest xP I digress; this was a believable scenario and my only regret was that it was simply too short; I wouldn't mind reading an expanded version of this
Sosa Lola chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
You made me cry! That part when Pete started crying along with PJ killed me. PJ will always hold a special place in my heart.
inujisan chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
this is actually a pretty good story to rationalize what had happened between Goof Troop and the Goofy Movie. It really does seem to relate with a lot of teens today. Kudos to you. I love the final words of true friendship