|Reviews for In Living Color|
| clairemorris chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Wow just wow
| Nannyjojo chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Well, it seems the family are trying to push the two together.
Katie is so sweet, she has won three grown men over at first glance more or less, and then there is Alice of course.
Looking forward to more.
| tawelephant chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I LOVED IT!
Finally an update today that didn't make me want to slit my wrists. Everyone has jumped the heartbreak train.
Can you give a heads up if you take that track too ? :) Thanks !
| teamhotmen chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
lovein the name of Ali's shop it's fab and Katie is stealing heart all over the place
| GGDreamy chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Amazing! Please update soon
| FL Sunshine chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I love the little girl writting, that has got to be hard
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Oh I love this story. It has everything. A rich, handsome boss; a poor, young waitress; and a beautiful, smart two year old. I can't wait for more.
| SunflowerFran chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
This seems like it is going to be adorable...Edward is super nice, and he already has a thing for Bella...and she has her eye on him...what could be the problem?
| sassygirl156 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Like it. You did well with how a little one talks without being completely over the top. I'll remind myself this is fiction-no way any real world Charlie would walk away so easily and turn over his granddaughter to a total stranger! That's why they call it fiction :)
| princess07890 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
This is amazing so far! I really love it so much already! I love an older Edward ;) There is only one problem with this story...here, "I stand up and pull out $40 to pay the bill..." There is no such thing as a $40 bill.
| gmgirl10 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Love this story already and we are only in chapter 1. Katie is such a sweetheart and so is Edward.
| Zpower21 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
This is really cute! It has a child like feel to it. I'm not sure about that aspect yet. I will reserve judgement for later on that.
| Karen chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Wow! I didn't even see who wrote this til I got to the end of the chapter and god I LOVE your stories! When I see an update it makes my day! Sometimes my week! Love these stories and this one is SOOOOO good!
| tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Loved it:) Edward is so sweet. Looking forward to reading more.
| shewoolf chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Promising beginning... makes me want lots more!