Reviews for Shadows
xforeverherex chapter 14 . 12/4/2012
Well c'mon the story wouldn't be twice as much fun and exciting if it was all smooth sailing... :P can't wait for next update!
Sorayathehedgehog chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
so sweet and well written well done
McKazekage chapter 14 . 12/3/2012
Love this story! This fic has so much depth to it! I wonder what Temari will think of Hinata now that she has stood up against Neji to protect Gaara?
QueenP19 chapter 14 . 12/2/2012
Hey, even if it isn't smooth sailing, at least they are progressing right? So glad to see another chapter and looking forward to next week. :)
rao hyuga 18 chapter 14 . 12/2/2012
This was so good! I really like your version of ninjas, plus it made for a good study break from finals. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Melodi Moon chapter 14 . 12/2/2012
Thanks for the update...I'm loving the shift in their relationship too!
WolvesImmortalRising chapter 13 . 12/2/2012
Crap. I was hoping that Hinata'd have the bakugyan (not sure how to spell it.) *shrugs* I thought Hanabi was kind of funny; planting her hands on her hips and snapping at Gaara. Though Neji was rude; his attitude was justified by his desire to protect Hinata. Now that I think about it, it resembles Temari's outlook on the 'alliance' between Gaara and Hinata, and thus Suna and Konoha: the unyielding older sibling who will do anything to protect their family. It's sweet in a rude, hair-raising kind of way if you tilt your head to the side and squint a little. Gaara and Hinata Passion! They are sweet. Their relationship is so thought-out and, at the same time, undetermined, it makes me swoon. I love it.
-Salam, Uchiha Miyoki-chan
WolvesImmortalRising chapter 12 . 12/2/2012
Finally, some light! I thought that Gaara had a hand in his father's death but I wasn't sure. This chapter was a bit somber but then again, this whole story seems to be full of woe. I'm finding that I like Temari more and more as the story progresses but there's still that part of me that despises her and sees her as a spoiled, egotistical, self-righteous prick. :/ But I'm not all nitpicky because there was a pick-me-up: GaaraxHinata. *squels* Kawaii!
-Wishing you well, Uchiha Miyoki-chan
xforeverherex chapter 13 . 12/1/2012
It just gets better and better, each time... and u can't help but sink in deeper in the story. plus this extra chapter with hiashi's letter and the gaahina moment... am glad u didnt wait for next week to update! :D good job
ssspooky chapter 13 . 11/29/2012
Wow... Hiashi's letter was xD Mmmmm I'm repeating myself by telling you that the chapter is great! (as always jejeje) Just one thing: I can't help myself, you know, I really want to smash Neji's head into a wall (repeatedly) for interrupting the"kiss" moment... Why everytime they are finally pushing down their walls something has to happen? ARGH! frustating! They are in the sprigntime of youth, for godness's sake! They haven't talked abouit it either... mmm I'm not criticizng you, I know you have all planned and you will write about it eventually, I'm only a little curious and/or anxious. Anyways, that has been a REALLY FAST update! I can't wait until monday! Thanks for your effort! Tons of kisses!
shyprincess82 chapter 13 . 11/28/2012
I loved the letter that Hiashi wrote to Hinata in this chapter. It was really heart-warming and you see a side of Hiashi that he never portrays to Hinata in the anime. You have really put alot of effort into this story and it is definatly one of my favorite stories. You are a very good writer. Good Chapter! Now hopefully Gaara can warm up to Hinata a little bit more, but the way you are writing this is amazing please keep it up!
QueenP19 chapter 13 . 11/28/2012
Oooh! The plot thickens. What a great surprise in the middle of the week. Looking forward to Monday's chapter even more. :)
McKazekage chapter 13 . 11/28/2012
AWESOME CHAPTER! one of my favorite yet! love it and I love when you update early (I know... don't get used to it... but it does make my week just that little bit better!) EPICNESS! I really wish Temari would be less nasty but I suppose I would be too if the whole village had a vendetta against my husband...
rao hyuga 18 chapter 13 . 11/28/2012
What a chapter!
sailorangelmoon1 chapter 12 . 11/28/2012
I can't wait for the next chapter this one had a lot of answers great job!
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