Reviews for Roommates
Maggie chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
SOOOO CUTE!
Katara-Hatake chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Okay. *Breaths in a huff of air..*

HAHAHAHHAAH! :') Oh god! This cracked me up for the sole purpose of imagining Sasu-chan embarassed and flapping like a fool! :')

The-one-who-is-plotting

K-H
Laniol chapter 3 . 10/16/2012
This is by far one of the best sasusaku stories I have read. It is wonderfully written and refreshing.
It was a joy to read from the perspective of a Sasuke who wasn't totally depressive and rude, but still had that aspect of himself that we love.
What I loved most about this story, was the fact that we got to see a love-struck Sasuke, stumbling over himself. I loved it, I need to read it again!
Please, write more stories like this one! It was such a wonderful and well written story!

Your one-shots leave me wanting more, I really love your multi-chapter stories. :)
xHeartofBlazexX chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
OMG I'm smiling like a sap. The fluff! Excuse me while I flail and squeal like a fangirl. Squee!
xHeartofBlazexX chapter 2 . 10/13/2012
Sasuke when will you see that you and her are meant to be, idiot! 'I will endure' my ass! Tell her you love her already and make tons of babies! Love the way you created his dream - very creative! You're a genius as always.
xHeartofBlazexX chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
This was extremely hilarious! Those boys never cease to make me giggle uncontrollably. Poor sasucakes is finding his hormones, too. After Sai, huh? LOLOLOL at the way he was thrusting his hips forward and Naruto pretending to make out with himself - I can't with them! Hahaha
JinnySkeans chapter 3 . 10/3/2012
Beautiful, beautiful ending to another beautiful, beautiful story!

I love stories that tie up all the loose ends, and ones where everything comes full circle. (For example, how Naruto put Sai in a chokehold in the beginning chapter, and how Sai put Naruto in a chokehold at the end.) It shows that you didn't forget any of your own details when you sew them all up nicely like you did here. And it's hard as hell sometimes to remember even your own ideas.

Your story has a no-frills kind of focus that pulls me in right away. There's no meandering, unnecessary detail, but at the same time, I don't feel like the description was lacking at all. You found that perfect balance where the readers are getting all the information without being overloaded with extraneous description. AND I'M IN LOVE.

It's also interesting to read an in-character story where Sasuke's struggling with his own hormones. It's not even alluded to a single time in the anime, but if it was ever explored in any depth, I feel like that scenario would look a lot like the Sasuke you've written here. Battling for self-control and completely tempted the entire time? You wrote it perfectly.

I also loved the inclusion of Naruto and Sai. They didn't detract from the main romantic storyline, instead they contributed to it. Because any Team 7 romance has to include all the members, to an extent. Most times, writers will either gloss over the significance of the outlier members, or just omit them entirely, and it weakens their work. But you included just enough of them to enhance the quality of your story. Like you always do. Because you are amazing.

Beautifully-written and nicely-paced. It didn't rush or drag, it just flowed naturally, and the engagement ending was adorable, and one I haven't seen before. I LOVED this story, girl! Thank you so much for writing it, for transcribing it back to this site, and for doing what you do best: dazzle. Great job!

xoxo Daisy :)
iHeartStar chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
OMG. That is freaking sweet! :")
sasusakufan2357 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Ohhh I love it! I didn't know it would be so short hehe! And I'm loving the SasuSaku love! Hehe Sai is always so funny hahaha! And eeekkk! I can't believe Sasuke proposed! How cute! (: and um...I know I already said this before but I can't help but mention it again...roommates is also spelled wrong in the summary. Sorry! I just thought you would like to know...anyway I can't wait for more stories from you! Bye!
Veronyka18 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Nooo! This was really good that I didn't want it to end T_T
It was funny, it was cute, it was hot! It was awesome, really!
Good job!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
So sweet.
LadyMartel4000 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Awesome one-shot? Bit ooc though, but was a bit funny! Please keep writing!
hoshikaeri chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
That was an intense ride!

I could just imagine Sasuke being like that and I...melt. Hahaha. Thank you for this fic.
LovexxxSakuraUchiha chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
Awwwwwwww!
10Roseleaf chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
Oh I love how the story comes full circle with the rocks. And sai oh sai! Love his quick intercourse comment and underwear adventures. Sneaky Sakura having a perv. Love love!
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