|Reviews for It's Working!|
| Ominous Rain chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Having read your other story, I can see the development of your writing from this to that. This was still pretty good though :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
I honestly love the way you think.
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
I really like it! **
| Harukaze Tamiya chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Is very satisfactory to see the body of Lord Syaoran Li working...working very well...everything...they mouth, and tounge, and skin, and of course his member...
Fai-san what the hell you need to do with they...well i see you was helping...but i think was not necesary...Tsubasa and Lord Syaoran have everything "planing and calculating"...i thing xD
The one-shot was very fantastic and the lust lemon yaoi in the write was perfect..i liked very much...i never enjoyed so much read someting..but this one-shot fic have all i want and more..and i very..very enjoyed read this...is the best one-shot fic of tsubasa reservoir ever...i hope and wait more of your work in the future... and i give you a apologize for not review before...because i read this already...
well this is everything... 1000 blessing and take care of yourself Green Sphynx-san
| The Magnetic Witch chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
The ending... XD
| Darkchibi-chan chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Hell YES. That's my first words that pop into mind. I love you for writing this. You have no idea. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE write more soon.:3
| Skittles Pie chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you I love you. Write more, I love FaiSyao and SyaoSyao.
| kuroXIII chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Okay... Let's get the technical stuff over with, shall we?
Let's see, the beginning was a little vague when you were referring to which of the sets were who until you got to the "inspection" part. The descriptions or words you used seemed a little awkward like "healthy pace" but it's not bad. There are the regular grammar problems as well but not enough to make you get stuck on it while reading this. And there is the usually thing of keeping the characters in character but you did mention that 7 years has passed and a lot of things could happen in 7 years so I don't mind.
Now, the actual story itself... :D
... I bet the Sakura's are having a similar experience themselves (except with just two people). I laughed a little when Syaoran mentioned that Tsubasa's mother had a little obession with mirrors... XD
Hmmm. Syaoran's quite eager to try out Fai's suggestion. :D I wonder what memories did Tsubasa see of their lives...
Huh. Is it just me or is Fai a bit too excited when setting up Syaoran and Tsubasa together? Is it a kink of his or his own ideas with twincest...
I'm a little worried at the implication that Tsubasa's first two tries involved alcohol. He didn't seem to mind too much so I'm not sure what happened exactly. I'm just a little worried cause some people are sensitive to this kinda thing although it's usually on livejournal or dreamwidth that they address the issue.
Either way, loved reading the one-shot even if it made me curious about previous events and long for a sequel. I hope you can make more fics like this in the future. :D
BTW, in Tsubasa's group before they got C!Syaoran and C!Sakura back, was there KuroFai? And were they all having a friends with benefits arrangement or something since Tsubasa seems to have slept with them a bit?