Reviews for Ronnie's other daughter
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6
very good story, are you planning to update some more?
Guest chapter 24 . 1/29
Reading this story for the very first time. Very good story. Well written. Please update soon!
Rachelmasonfan25 chapter 24 . 7/26/2013
This is really great! Please update soon xxx
Guest chapter 24 . 5/20/2013
ABSOLUTELY, AMAZING! Can not wait to read more updates. Please update soon. Great Writing Skills. :-)
Guest chapter 24 . 5/16/2013
Absolutely Fantastic Fic. Loved every chapter I read. Can't wait for more updates! :-)
Kendall chapter 24 . 5/12/2013
This was not rubbish. Enjoyed reading this fictional story very much. I cannot wait to read more updates.
Kendall chapter 23 . 5/2/2013
FANTASTIC & GREAT Fic! Looking forward to an update real soon.
Starr chapter 23 . 4/23/2013
Finished reading this fic and it is ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! I love this fic so much. Great Job. PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON! :-))
Guest chapter 23 . 4/12/2013
Very good chapter. Well written.

Suggestions on getting the mushy mother daughter moments: Maybe you could have Lexi get jealous of the attention that Ronnie shows to Amy or maybe one of Lexi's friends. OR Maybe you could have Lexi to think that Ronnie loved Danielle more than her. OR maybe you could have Lexi think that Ronnie never wanted her...Hope those were pretty good suggestions.

Anyhow, Good Luck and keep up the Fantastic Story-Line.
Guest chapter 22 . 4/8/2013
An apology for any hurtful and nasty comments. I guess I just didn't understand where you were taking the fictional storyline.

Anyway thanks for the explanation and thanks for the mushy & soppy storyline with Ronnie and Lexi.

ABSOLUTELY LOVED CH-22. It was mushy & soppy and looking forward to even more mushy & soppy storylines between mummy and daughter.

Keep it up and please DON'T STOP writing the storyline.

I am fully enjoying reading along as each chapter progress more and more.
Guest chapter 21 . 4/7/2013
Okay just finish reading. What the HECK happened!

Fic was heading in a good positive direction with Ronnie and Lexi now bonding and getting along but heck! WHAT HAPPENED!

Don't like where fic is heading.

Want some suggestions Then USE some of the suggestion I just read in some of the previous reviews.

The problems is I think you got readers who just want to see Ronnie and Lexi being a soppy and mushy Mummy and Daughter but that's just what your readers likes and wishes to read. We want mushy, soppy Mummy and Daughter Story-Lines.

We want to read where Ronnie is always spoiling Lexi.
We want to read where Ronnie is always telling Lexi how she loves her.
We want to read where Ronnie is always telling Lexi how proud of her she is.
We want to read where Ronnie is always cuddling with Lexi.
We want to read where Ronnie is always being a protective Mummy bear over Lexi.
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We want to read where Lexi now calls Ronnie Mummy.
We want to read where Lexi is always sitting in Ronnie’s lap.
We want to read where Lexi is actually being a good and well-mannered kid.
We want to read where Lexi is pretty popular at school.
We want to read where Lexi is proud of her Mummy.
We want to read where Lexi will get angry and tell people off if she hears anyone bad-mouthing her Mummy.

We just want a mushy and soppy Mummy and Daughter Fictional Story-Line.
Guest chapter 21 . 4/7/2013
Whoa! Don't exactly know what happened with Lexi character... She went from being loving and clingy to Ronnie to being well basically 'A Bitchy Mean Girl'

I realize she is in that pre-teen stage and growing up but damn! why does her character have to be written in as being bitchy, foul-mouth, mean and ugly?

WOW! Really was not expecting that 180 degree turn-around with Lexi character.

The storyline now seems to be heading backwards and downwards.

I just think that Lexi and Ronnie need much more mummy-daughter bonding time together before Lexi is written into a much older character line. (But of course you don't have to take my suggestion... just my opinion that's all!)

I know and realize that this is just a fictional storyline but also from first hand real life experience believe it or not ...NOT EVERY pre-teen is bitchy, foul-mouth, mean and moody.

Think about it...Ronnie and Lexi had been apart for a short bit before Lexi entered back into Ronnie's life...

What? Ronnie still haven't gotten over Danielle's adoption and death and therefore Lexi will never, ever be as good as or loved as much as Danielle?

Please! Please! Please! NO MORE depressing, bitchy, foul-mouth, mean and moody storyline for Ronnie and Lexi.

Also is this fictional storyline suppose be written as though there are some unresolved hidden anger issues with Lexi?

But hey! Why not just take this fictional storyline in a totally different direction from any other normal mummy and pre-teen relationship.

MORE! Mummy and Daughter bonding time. Getting to know each other. Talking to each other. Learning each other. Respecting each other.
Guest chapter 20 . 3/13/2013
I have read this over and over again. This is really a good write on Ronnie and Lexi. Ronnie seems to be stronger and back and capable of defending both herself and her child.

How will you write things going for Ronnie; Such as:

(1.) Does Ronnie not have a job in this Fic?

OR- (2.) How is Ronnie able to take care of herself and Lexi?

OR- (3.) Is Ronnie still part owner at RnR?

Good Writing though. Good to see that you are writing Ronnie's character in a much better and brighter light than what EE did to her. She definitely deserves to be written in as being a very smart and successful business woman, as well as a very loving, spoiling and protective mother.

Keep it up! Keep it up! Keep it up! Keep it up! Keep it up! Keep it up!
Look forward to your next fantastic update!
Guest chapter 20 . 3/13/2013
GREAT! Way to go Ronnie. Standing up for her baby. You don't mess with her baby no matter who it is. Not Roxy, not anybody messes with Ronnie's baby girl.

I'm really starting to love reading your fic. Especially enjoy the close mummy-daughter bond that is starting to grow strong between Ronnie and Lexi.

I'm still a mummy's girl and I guess I'm a sucker for strong and close mummy-daughter relationships.

I'm 19 yrs. old and still call my mum, 'Mummy' and I always will and I'll always be a mummy's girl.

Keep up the good writing. CAN'T WAIT for the next update! MORE Ronnie spoiling Lexi and MORE Ronnie & Lexi bonding, MORE cheesy stuff between the two, hahaha.

Again Thanks, Thanks, Thanks! :-))
Guest chapter 19 . 3/7/2013
Love, Love, Love this Ch. Love how Ronnie is really starting to be that lovingly protected mother over Lexi and how she is also starting to show her nurturing, doting, and loving mother side. Also it is equally WONDERFUL that Lexi wanted her mummy and her mummy's cuddles in the hospital room. Also good to see that you are allowing your writing to show Ronnie & Lexi truly bonding without any interferences from Roxy or Jack. I'm just so happy to finally read how Ronnie is becoming this AMAZING and FANTASTIC Mummy to Lexi. I hope Ronnie's and Lexi mummy-daughter bond continue to grow loving and stronger and I also hope Ronnie could somehow become a wealthy successful business woman making lots of money and that she would spoil Lexi with lots of cuddles, snuggles, eskimo-kisses and a bunches of saying how much she is so proud of Lexi and also telling Lexi all the time how much she loves Lexi...

GREAT, GREAT, GREAT Chapter! I just absolutely love reading about Ronnie and Lexi strong, close, growing and loving mummy-daughter relationship... Also would be so cute if Lexi called Robbie, mummy's :-)

Thanks for the GREAT Writing
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