|Reviews for TRON: A Different Legacy|
| Darktiger09 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This story shows amazing promise even from the start. Your writing is clear and to the point, without being too brief or short, and your depictions of the visions were easily imagined in the mind's eye. However I would suggest adding a tad bit more detail in future chapters.
A good thing to keep in mind is that when writing a story, don't simply 'tell' the readers - show them, make them be able to imagine it and see what is happening as if they were reading a picture book. Color in the lines of the story, flesh it out and make it real, describe how the water dripped from the program's skin as they emerged from the Sea of Simulation. Little things like that, along with a solid plot, are what make an unforgettable story.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this story progresses. For a first chapter, this was very intriguing, and I'm excited to learn more about this mysterious program and what their fate has in store for them.