Reviews for Peter's Secret
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 5 . 6/12/2014
Oooooh snappity snap snap snap
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
Oh my goodness I want to cry amazing job
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 3 . 6/12/2014
The feels man the feels
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
Nawww awesome chapter
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Oh my goodnes awsome start
Booklove992001 chapter 16 . 4/15/2014
You skipped chapter 7
pinkninja107 chapter 14 . 1/23/2014
I'm going to go ahead and be a grammar nazi for this. In the last sentence its " Your," not "You're," because " You are Pa's doesn't make any sense.
random girl chapter 15 . 6/27/2013
AH! IT HAPPENED AGAIN! You used "niece" instead of "nephew" when referring to Peter.
It's about mid-way down the page at the end of this paragraph:
"Actually Stark…" Loki started. "From my own personal research, some of the greatest minds of Misgard study or have taken part in the English language." Loki winked at his niece and Tony just scoffed.
(also, it should be "Midgard")
Still love the story though. I'm really not trying to be mean when I point out these things and I'm sorry if it seemed like I was being mean. We all make mistakes, and no one is going to go flip a table over a few simple errors.
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...except for him apparently. Moving on...
keep up the good work!
random girl chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
I really love your story, it's funny and very well written. This is actually the second or third time I've read it, but this time I noticed something that made me giggle; near the top Loki says to Peter: "Can I not see my niece…?"
Small error, but it made me laugh because a) it's implying Peter's a girl, and b) I only just noticed it after reading the story two other times.
Other than that you have done a wonderful job, keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/12/2013
Why is it called chapter 8? Did I miss 7?
slywern chapter 7 . 4/27/2013
Chapter 6 & 7 is the same
JustAnotherTeenFangirl chapter 6 . 4/3/2013
Peter would be Thor's nephew, not his niece...
greasergirl0003 chapter 17 . 1/4/2013
That was really good.
RatedRenegade chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
well this is new but i like it
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Hehehe. "I don't make deals with Super heroes." Clever :D
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