|Reviews for Carry My Body Safe to Shore|
| Reading-in-the-Corner chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I absolutely loved reading this.
I like how you didn't give the plot away right away, letting it build up, not just for us as the reader, but also for Derek. The weary town, the warning about staying away from the sea at night, just the fact he wants to know the towns secret. I also enjoy how the town are so protective of Stiles and how they are trying to live up to the promise they made to the young boy who saved them.
Stiles as a merman is fantastic. I love his character. Even from a young age he is willing to sacrifice himself for his mothers safety as well as his towns. All he asks in return is for them to be happy. Its sadly beautiful.
Amazing story and it's something I will definitely be re-reading in the future :)
| sub0chick chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
and again with the awwws! you did a great job with the AU, loved watching derek and stiles interact with each other. wonderful work :D
| Cas Novak Winters chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Oh my god, amazing! XD just started watching teen wolf and I'm hooked! Love this ship so much D you are an amazing author.
| Wayofthewolf1996 chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
hey, i just really love this fic. just wanted to let you know.
| wolfgenes chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
"He sees the sign that tells him he's passing the line into town and it's not far until he's driving through the town; old, homey buildings and friendly-enough looking people."
*_* the visuals omfg you describe things so prettily
"They're already in their bathing suits and he shamelessly looks from behind his aviators, giving a grin."
LMAO YES I CAN TOTALLY SEE THAT HAPPENING SPOT ON ALSO GOOD IMAGE.
also just seeing laura alive and near him and doing things around him and existing and hugging and smiling it's perfect and she's perfect and i'm /cry/ this girl she could've had it all sobs uncontrollably and keeps reading also danny omfg danny and derek being friends and swimming together i need this in my life and danny is sunshine and oh my god yES.
"And no, it's Chris Argent down the road."
OH MY GOD
"Thing is, he doesn't know what he saw."
got a fucking shiver how am i supposed to deal with this type of good writing this is too much these sentences how do you talent jesus fucking christ
"Yeah, go jack off with Danny."
peter ogawd except yes please derek go jack off with danny this is something i'd like to see?
OK SO THEIR FIRST MEETING WAS FANTASTIC? because the way you write it it's so natural and just beautiful and good and happy and yes. also laura afterwards? fucking laura. my baby. BABY BABY BABY i can't. AND THEN THERE WAS THE TAIL SCENE AND I COULDN'T EVEN STOP BECAUSE IT WAS SO FUCKING INTENSE AND WELL-WRITTEN AND WORD CHOICES AND DIALOGUE!111111
"Fuckin' tail, man. That's not cool." Scott makes a very unhappy face at Stiles, but it only makes Stiles laugh.
MY FUCKING FEELINGS
ok so wow dude kissing and making out and fmdsklfjdsmfl can i take writing-kissing-scenes lessons with you or. because that was beautiful. happily and wonderfully and giving-me-butterflies beautiful. i feel like it's important to say that this isn't a ship that i'm usually fond of, yet you make it work with your perfection ok that kissing scene killed me boo hoo sheriff
"Fine. But it's just because I wanna make out with you more."
lmao you're such a kid jfc you're adorable and perfect and mermaid version of you is /BRILLIANT/
"So, he strips."
good choice a
ok wow was not expecting all these feelings and emotions when derek stripped ok it was just emotional and WOW NOT ACCEPTABLE who gave you the right to play with my emotions!
fucking shit everything happened then and i couldn't even stop reading i was just so hypnotized by everything and wow kate and wow everything and christ and birthday and feelings and declarations and love and WHAT IS COHERENCE HOW DO I DEAL WITH THESE FEELINGS nda mslakhflJKDLFASHFjdlsdhskalf jadlkHDKLSAJFKLADS!111111111111!one
ok the rest was just way too intense as well and i was drooling and just not blinking and i'm like the jb girl rn because I DON'T EVEN BLINK AT ALL just stared at the computer compulsively and scrolling down wanting mroemroemreomroemreoroermeo
AND THEN THE ENDING
YOU KILLED ME
so yes you are perfect never change also ilu this is fucking brilliant
| KorvaThePuusti chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
this was really nice. scott would have made a great flounder, though :D
| KalaKitsune chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Loved it! I love mermaids and Stiles so its pretty much the best thing
| RaiineDays chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Oh my god this was amazing! Those two are just the cutest things ever! 3
| AmandaFray chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
| No pen names left chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Very sweet! Makes me want to break into song.
| lyokoyaoi chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
This Story is great. I love all supernatural Stiles fics. But I would have liked Derek to End up a merman instead of Stiles ending up human. Other than that, I love it.