Reviews for Lessons on Manners
NinjaQueen33 chapter 1 . 8/15
Ahh! This was so cute! I loved the entire first half when Makino was teaching Ace lessons and going through the gradual improvements of the lessons and then the part where Ace was bringing all of his lessons to use to the quiet, nice man was so heartwarming. Then the last half with Shanks was funny and brought it home for me. Really enjoyed this! 3
Angryboy13 chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Lol
Wera chapter 1 . 10/29/2015
Ahaha, that was adorable. I loved this alot, the progress he made was interesting to read and I really like how you write Ace.
Phantomfray chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
It's adorable. I like the no talking about Luffy for over five hours joke
BlueRubyBeat chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
So cute! And Hilarious with a capital 'H'! XD
Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Perfect. *gives thumbs up*
Felixsk1 chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Good observation on Ace!
I laughed so hard at so many parts, so thanks for that.
Oh, Ace.
yageni chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
I loved the fic! Little Ace is so cute trying so hard to learn manners :D and Makino is a really comprehensive teacher, patiently guiding him.
But guess what? what I loved the most was you note at the end of the fic. I had completely forgot about that "detail" and yes, it certainly makes him more lovable! LOL
Thank you so much for writhing this!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
OMG this is so cute
Wolf and MR Lover chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
I have to agree with you on that point.! :"D
Cute Kirby chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
I couldn't stop grinning. This is really cute!
Diclonious57 chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Ace is always lovable
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I loved this! :D
HangryLei chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Bwahahahaha! I saw that episode where Makino was teaching Ace some manners! Is this really what happened? I need to go back and watch it again...
Stelra Etnae chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
So cute! This is absolutely adorable. We all know that Makino taught Ace his manners, and I like your take on the lessons. Really nicely done.
The last part with the Red Hair Pirates was hilarious as well. The crew yelling out together is so funny, reminds me of the scene with Ace's narcolepsy in Alabasta, hahahahaha. "You've got no right to say that, you doting father!" Epic line, that. XD
Nice story! I enjoyed reading it!
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