Reviews for Falling: AU Missing Scene
jackiejack chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
Another great story! I miss this show.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
Very cute. Very sweet John.
Nice job.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Very sweet! In character. LOVE it!
I read not write chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
So I was a Hicks/Rachel shipper for sure, not sure how it even came to mind because I don't think there were many hints to it in the show but I really really wanted that to happen :S

Having said that I really liked the way John and Rachel progressed, how he wasn't as perfect and uninhibited when it came to getting intimate as she thought he might be, his issue might not be as difficult as hers but to some extent he understands. Throughout the show I loved how sweet he was about waiting and making it work in a way that was comfortable for them both and I think you did a fantastic job of continuing that into your work :)

Great job!
Guest 2 chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
LOVE IT! Just right.
tvchick81 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
This was wonderful! I did feel like the episode was missing a scene like this and I am soooo happy that you wrote this! So cute!
My Darker Side chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Oh, Phinnie! This is SO sweet. I just LOVE it. So cute and in character.
I would've loved to see this scene in the episode. I, too, was looking forward to seeing John meet the parents and disappointed when he didn't.

Well-written as always. Keep up the awesome work!

P.S. I think John was super adorable when he said 'I give good parent', too. We are SO on the same wavelength!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
OMG, that was so darned cute! I can totally picture it happening.
Very in character to me. Good dialogue.
Great job!
Teyerin chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Enjoyable story and great read before the workday.
Alpha lover chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Really nice job. John is yummy. I agree, he'd be a hit with the parentals.
More please!