Reviews for The Rookie
Discordia81 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Ooh, great first chapter! Looking forward to reading more!
Tennischica2012 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
LOVE. More please! Is this drabble fic?
228 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Thank you for starting this, and please continue:)
OposKneg chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
oops!
Mireads chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Very good
Christina Fey chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Fantastic beginning!
diana2012 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
You are better than Stephanie Meyer since you post so many amazing fics. I'm excited about this one. Thanks for the chapter and please post soon.
TwimomJen chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Who was the blonde guy? James? Mike? I guess w/Ed being a rookie he didn't know who Bella was. But, he felt the connection when she looked at him. How old is Bella? 17? Bc if so, Edward is a rookie so he should be 23-25. When she turns 18 that's only a few years difference. Not to bad. Really enjoyed this. With it being a drabble, how often will you update? Looking forward to the next ch.

Jen :))
m0ld0va chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Great start. Definitely want to read more.
bon123 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I fear I'm gonna like it. ;-)
Star White chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Hot Damm...More Please ! and how is Emmett knows who Bella is and Edward is? They do work for/with Charlie right?
mzgypsy chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
can't wait to see what happens
MissBell29 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
This is great!

I cannot wait for more.
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Oh, this is going to be good! Already Edward is feeling ... something ... for Bella. Now, what is he going to do? She's the chief's daughter!

Can't wait for more! Thanks!

Sally
VickyStarfish chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Ooo! Nice start, can't wait for more! x
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