Reviews for The Rookie
Otaku Mama1 chapter 15 . 1/13/2014
Fun and quick...I like it.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/13/2013
Eh I think Charlie let them off to easy.
Signed -K chapter 15 . 11/11/2013
Epilogue! Please! I wanna know what became of them
Signed -K chapter 13 . 11/11/2013
Haha. Well Edward was right, what better way to torture him than at work.
Signed -K chapter 12 . 11/11/2013
Haha. Well if I wasn't right I the mark ;)
Signed -K chapter 11 . 11/11/2013
I've come to know your patterns and I know any second Charlie's gonna walk in on them
Signed -K chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
I'm definitely intrigued
Signed -K chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Baha! I like
DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma chapter 15 . 10/27/2013
I read this over at AO3. But wanted to come here to stick in my two cents. Bwahahaha! I absolutely LOVED it (as usual)!
You are an amazing writer.
This was funny, oh so sexy and I actually liked that I could imagine my own future for them...which is HEA of course!
Thanks for an awesome trip back to Forks with pit stops in Fluffville and Sexy Times Junction! Bwahahaha!
Don't stop writing and I won't stop reading!

Thanks for putting your stories on AO3 where they can be downloaded to iBooks so I can read them offline while traveling and when I don't have wifi access! I wish more FF authors would do that for us! I promise to come here and review after reading offline.

Love and Blessings!
xoxoxo
lissy2110 chapter 15 . 9/9/2013
Hey,

a fantastic story.

Thanks for writing.

Lissy
twimima7 chapter 15 . 9/7/2013
I want more of this story. It's wrong to stop but thank you I enjoyed it.
alizzie chapter 15 . 8/24/2013
loved this one really wish there was an epilogue or an 'older them' spin off
Mingleberry chapter 15 . 8/10/2013
What no epi?
blb1000 chapter 15 . 8/8/2013
I like that you left it open to our interpretation. Bravo!
blb1000 chapter 14 . 8/8/2013
We have not heard from officer #4?
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